| Reviews for The Betrayal |
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  Rev chapter 3 . 10/9/2019 This is really nice! Zero x Mikan hmm The way you conveyed the emotions. The way you write itself, it's very compelling. Hope you'll finish this. It's wonderful! |
 Anime100 chapter 3 . 8/29/2019 This is truly interesting to read; please update very soon I hope Mikan gives them the cold shoulder; they deserve it for hurting her |
| Nicole aka The AnimeLover chapter 4 . 8/15/2019 After I finished chapter 3, so eager to continue reading on and then clicked on the next button to move to the next chapter, and it ended up being an authors update, i literally screamed NOOO lol I want to know what happens next, I need more xD I really cant wait for your next update! Its so amazing!(: |
| VL x DL lover chapter 3 . 3/15/2018 wow really great I can't wait until the next one! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/3/2018 This is great! I would love to see Mikan finding others and make her former “friends” jealous! That would be awesome! But whatever you want.. that is just an idea! Keep up the great work! |
| DELEETEETHISACCOUNTTPLEEASE chapter 3 . 1/9/2018 AWWW POOR MIKAN I HOPE ONE DAY SHE BEATS ALL THEIR ASSES |
| Geneenja chapter 4 . 12/31/2017 Oof i totally understand being busy and i hope you get to update more. Happy new year and i wish you luck on the next following years. |
| UnicornTalesLol chapter 3 . 4/22/2017 aw. please write more. |
| MISUNDERSTOOD and FUCKED UP chapter 3 . 12/24/2016 please update. T-T |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/6/2016 Update please! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/30/2016 Great, keep up the work can not wait for the next update |
| Aqua Fire Queen chapter 3 . 9/13/2016 Thank u for updating! P. S. Is Sabi a female? I think it is since it would be strange to have a male voice in your head i female. Thx once again |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2016 Great Story! I hope you finish the next chapter of this story soon! (: |
| Kimcub110 chapter 3 . 9/3/2016 Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Maeoki chapter 3 . 9/2/2016 You. Have. Saved. My. Life. From. Boredom! I was soooo bored today, but you have lighten up my day! With a new chapter! I can't wait till Mikan and Zero meet! My heart is thumping in excitement! |
