| Reviews for A Game of Fate |
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Haseo187 chapter 9 . 8/15 I love this story I hope you decide to continue it and keep up the good work! |
Echos of the Storm chapter 9 . 8/5 this is great i love this story please continue this amazing work. |
The needle-sword expert chapter 9 . 7/22 Ooff man this story is goood. |
SelinaSnicket chapter 9 . 6/1 Update soon please? |
Sin Danimal chapter 9 . 5/20 I usually like these types of stories but almost everyone gives up on them. I hope you keep at it cause I'm into it would be a shame if you quit |
TeddyBearGuru97 chapter 9 . 5/19 I love this story |
twinsouls chapter 7 . 5/9 this is beautifully done i was willing to give this a chance and honestly glad i finally found a relatable percy jackson gamer fic. you mind keeping it up? |
Natsuxmira4life chapter 9 . 4/29 update please! |
random123games chapter 9 . 3/31 Love it so far, can't wait to see this story progress. Personally! I have nothing to say about possible improvements that haven't already been said. Great job so far, can't wait for the next update. |
Xerzo LotCN chapter 9 . 3/30 well that interesting but ok curious of nancy is a legacy of hermes who was her hermes demigod ancestor? and how far down does blood still count idr as it was introduced in H.o.O. which didn't go to far in depth and had a terrible end so ba i haven't finished nor continued the series or read the next mythos obligatory rip non harem lol |
Spartan3909 chapter 9 . 3/29 Thanks for the chapter _. |
Rebmul chapter 9 . 3/29 lols this should be fun cant wait for the next chapter |
Noivad Neao-Nefarious Izanagi chapter 9 . 3/29 An idea for you. A way of levelling up skills in a more realistic but fun way could be learning different ways to use them or techniques for them. Example (A): Percy learns how to shape water, freeze it and other things. Example (B): Percy/Nancy/Grover learn different techniques that go with their weapons like disarming techniques, killing techniques, crippling techniques and the like. This would give the story more 'flavour' as instead of saying "Percy trained his swordsmanship for a while" you can describe what he trained like clean cuts or combos. Another suggestion would be Percy learning how to use his powers in more intricate ways like absorbing water from living things/the atmosphere when he's not near an area with water. A lot of Gamer fics I read give Percy spells way out of his elemental range without letting him master what he hs first. Hydrokinesis is OP hell if used right and with his power, Percy should be able to learn more and bring out its high potential. I don't mind him learning other elements hell I encourage it just for the shock factor that will come from it but I hope you don't ignore his born with abilities. |
Dragon of Winter chapter 9 . 3/29 The poor kids have quite the explanation to give. Oh well, does the horn get them anything? Can they use it to make higher quality magical items? |
Arraia chapter 9 . 3/29 Perfect and update soon please Op percy and Percy x Artemis |