its a shame this is dead I would love to see why marron is a captive

i was going to say let eighteen fuck either bulma or videl next

Chapter 3?

Do one with Hermaphrodite Android 18 and her daughter Marron. I know that sounds weird but I like it

Make another

I really love the idea of 18 and Chichi together. I think they're both really sexy. Nice touch.

Hey dude fantastic fanfic,

Can you do the next chapter with videl?

Ill be waiting to read that

I don't mind waiting for a chapter with a genderbend goku. Unless you don't do those. Love the story

pretty hot story

Wouah pas mal mais le duo C18/Videl est courant surtout que si tu fais la suite avec Videl tu prend l'histoire d'un autre.

ohohohoho i mean when i saw the chapter title was like Maron? and then i saw Marron the child and i was like "well she still exists" and after 18 essentially raping her little fuck toy Maron the Ex i finished the chapter wondering; is Marron Krillin's or Maron's eh? eh? i mean if Krillin is still head over heals for 18 foot long cock and all and would he just be cool with it and raise her? otherwise Marron is his and 18 has working girl parts which i imagine you could work into a 69 scene
pretty hot all around did not expect the old chi-chi being first but whatevs, OH and speaking of Chichi we need a scene with her and Goku (yard cock? lol?) maybe a flashback or a rekindling in their older years? one would end hot and the other cute as i imagine the after glow for 50 year olds is not... sexy
cant wait til the next chapter
thx ;)

Love the story so far pls up date soon I can't wait to see what happens to videl

videl bulma launch vegeta krillin

A little short and you have difficulty keeping your tenses straight and often use the wrong homophone
Nonetheless it was an interesting read

Vegeta. I could totally see 18 making him suck her cock and take it up the butt. :)