If you want to write more, do it cus it'll just save the day. Im in love with this story and the net needs more stories like this one :D
Hope you write more Neah and Allen, they are the best. (especially Neah)

Awesome story! I love the plot and the fact that Neah wasn't evil. Great idea and amazing writing!

Ohhhh... what a good fiction I love this and of course I love Neah and Allen too.
Is really good since all story and scenes remaining the same except some extra char and that's Neah.
Well since Neah in here is own char the story is a bit... change from the anime and manga.
Is interesting and refreshing to read it
Thanks for the story

Interesting story and well written
Thanks For sharing this
Can't wait to read the rest