This was adorable.

I love the interaction between Arslan and Elam. I love how Arslan was the one who found him. I love the pairing Elam/Arslan! They are so cute and adorable together! Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much!

Well, um... that was certainly unexpected. I’m sure people who ship Elam and Arslan love this, but do you think you could add the Romance genre to the description? It might be just me, but I was totally unprepared for that ending. Could you label this fic as Arslan/Elam somewhere so that your future readers are prepared? It was a good fic otherwise, pretty well written and everyone kept fairly in-character.

Impressive that you can wrap up a story so quick! I’m not sure what could be after this, but I’ll hang around to find out!

Ooh, tidbits about Elam’s past! This was a nice bonding chapter. I hope Arslan accidentally finds something more sinister out there than a simple stream... :D

I love how you add in little hints/reminders of how close Elam & Narsus are! It’s so sweet.

This looks promising! Everyone is pretty in-character, and it’s pretty well-written too. I can definitely feel that sense of foreboding in this first chapter. I can’t wait to read more!

Huh whaaaaat!? That end felt kinda weird, a little abrupt and out of line (Don't get me wrong, I do like it!)
It just feels like it was written in a totally other genre. Looking forward for other Arslan story's :)

*garbled screaming of cute children holy crab cakes this is such a cute n nice story lemme hug these two babies*

I love it!Them together is one of my OTPs!We need more of them together!I also love how Aslan is the more dominate in this one!

That was so dang adorable! I love the friendship of Elam and Arslan! *bows* This is a masterpiece you have written! Once I get the chance to login I'll fav this for sure! *swaying in wind* I'm just to lazy to login right now!

Update now

Update pretty please?

Update!:(

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