I reread the whole story since I was quite out of it after this long time. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. This one and your other stories as well. But I wouldn‘t mind if you finish one and go one with the next one so it‘s easier to follow. Can‘t reread all of them multiple times
But I just love your writing and the AUs you‘re creating. I love the tension between Jane and Lisbon in this one and it‘s just so thrilling how it will all turn out in the end. You’re so creativ and know how to let the characters act - bravo! PLEASE go one soon!

Have read all this story again and I love it. Hope you are able to continue with it. Many many thanks.

I also just wanted to emphasise that your character voices are so, so incredibly good. Thank you again, and I hope everything's well on your end in this strange new reality!

Hi, I wanted to thank you for writing this. I stayed up until after 6 in the morning reading, because I loved this so much and I just couldn't put it down. I particularly love the characterisation, banter, and relationship development. Everything feels so real - flawed, but honest. I also like what you did/what you're doing with Lorelei, I think it's a really refreshing, humanising take. I came back to The Mentalist after 8 years and it's really been such a treat to find this, so thanks for all of the feelings. :)

Please keep writing. It's so interesting!

Really enjoying this! Looking forward to seeing where it goes!

So glad to see you writing this again! As always I’m in awe of how you switch so gracefully between present and past and keep me interested in both. I’m intrigued!

Me encanta esta historia

I'm so glad you picked up this story again! I' ve been following your stories for many years and enjoy reading and rereading them. It would be great if you would post more regularly again. I've really missed your writing!

Just read this all in one go into the early hours of the morning cause it’s just so good I couldn’t stop!
Loving this story so much!

It’s so good to see your story and learn you may continue! I can’t tell you how often I’ve wanted to read your stories lately but have had computer problems and so cannot make my own schedule. This story is one of your best thanks for continuing.

that was a kick in the head. can't wait to see how rj meets his doom in this one. thanks for continuing.

Haven't read any fanfic for months & just 1 chapter of broken im suckered straight back to my fav duo. Great to see you writing again. Great returning chapter! Not shedding tears over lorelei inoperable tumour. Hehe. The dislike for that character goes deep . Can't send a review in my own acct as can't remember my password its been so long. Looking fwd to more chapters. Pickle!

Seeing this update made me absolutely ecstatic. To say it’s a breath of fresh air to have an update to this story is an understatement. You’re a staple in the Mentalist community — welcome home. I’ve been a long time fan of yours since you began writing fics for this forum. Hope all is well with you and that you are comfortable in your return.

When I got the email alert I couldn't believe my eyes. I thought it was a mirage, but no, there it was, chapter 38 right in front of me. I'm glad you decided to continue to write your stories and especially glad you decided to start with this one, I've always had a soft spot for Broken. It was the first fanfic I ever read and it's always been my favorite.

Lorelei is dying? I never would've guessed that would be how his ill-fated plan for revenge would start. Interesting the way Hightower went missing, we'll see if she can make it, with you one can never be sure. And you really made me laugh with the ringtone thing. Impatiently waiting to see if Lisbon can get something else out of Volker.

Good to have you back. Thanks for sharing.