I... Didn't read the part about this being a sequel. oops. BUt that's good, because now I'm pleasantly surprised and ready to start on the first story.

But before I do that, I have so much to say about this. This... Is exactly the type of fic I've been looking for. I wouldn't call myself someone starved for Luigi & Dimentio interactions, except it's actually the truth in some exceptions like if it's written in a good fic and has at least semi-serious characterization. (I just want to explore their dynamic /sobs) Second thing I want to say... IS THIS HEADING IN A PEASLEY/LUIGI/DIMENTIO POLYSHIP. BECAUSE, BLESS YOU, IT SEEMS LIKE IT with what Peasley says about 'What Mario, Bowser, and Peach have' and being suspiciously lax about Dime confessing. But... A fic with Dimentio/Luigi interactions and a good plot? There's already so much good in this story I'm hesitant to hope hhh

God I need to stop typing um I hope my exitement for Nintendo characters getting together didn't scare you off and that your writing muse doesn't leave your side in any further writing projects you try okay bYE

Take your time with the next story. Wonderful job

Yeah great chp worth the wait

More please! Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm pretty sure that Dimentio is still watching Luigi.

More please! Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm guessing King Boo?

More please! Can't wait for the next chapter!

More please! Can't wait for the next chapter! It's getting interesting!