| Reviews for Snow White and the Walking Dead (Part II) |
|---|
FluentInBullshit chapter 12 . 10/1/2016 Dunno why but Gwen seems a bit Mary Sue-ish to me. just a little tip for next time or whatever, that you remember everyone and everything is fallible. Just make sure to point out the flaws every once in a while. I mean, really? Gwen with her big rack, perfect singing voice, leadership skills, compassion and nothing wrong, even with her looks? Tbh, it's a bit unrealistic but this is your story and I really do love this and I love Gwen and Nessa and Andy but even the kindest person in the world has a flaw or two. And don't get angry at me either because in order to be a good author, you have to expect some constructive criticism from even your biggest fan. |
Miss October 13 chapter 28 . 2/15/2016 Rick is so awesome! I hope he can protect Lori, Gwen, and the baby from Shane |
Miss October 13 chapter 26 . 2/15/2016 So cute he wanted her picture |
Miss October 13 chapter 18 . 2/15/2016 So sad about Sophia |
Miss October 13 chapter 17 . 2/15/2016 Shane is such a freak, he needs to back off. Awe, Daryl says the sweetest things |
Miss October 13 chapter 16 . 2/15/2016 Glad Rick and Gwen got everything in control |
Miss October 13 chapter 15 . 2/15/2016 I think both Gwen and Daryl would make excellent parents. They should have a baby, that would be so cute a little Dixon running around. |
Miss October 13 chapter 14 . 2/15/2016 Awe, their first I love yous. How sweet! |
Miss October 13 chapter 12 . 2/14/2016 They are so good for each other |
Miss October 13 chapter 11 . 2/14/2016 Fucking Merle! Daryl is most definitely the man! |
Miss October 13 chapter 10 . 2/14/2016 ugh Shane... |
Miss October 13 chapter 9 . 2/14/2016 Chapter 9 fantastic! |
Miss October 13 chapter 8 . 2/14/2016 Oh Andy, protecting he's Auntie how cute. I really do enjoy his character |
Miss October 13 chapter 7 . 2/14/2016 I hope Gwen moves into Daryl's tent |
Miss October 13 chapter 6 . 2/14/2016 I swear Daryl and Gwen are so cute together |