Reviews for The Second Toll
AnimeJewel246 chapter 19 . 7/24
WOW! Can I just say how amazing and wonderfully done this story is? I'm pretty much on the edge of my seat, and when I found out you haven't updated in years, I honest to goodness felt like crying. I really, really, really, really hope you'll update this story. It's such an interesting take on Edward becoming a teacher at Hogwarts, and isn't one of those generic Harry Potter crossovers, and that's what I love about this story. I love the relationships between the characters, and I honestly have nothing but praise for this story. I don't want to pressure you or anything, but I really feel as if a lot of people would really love to have you write another chapter. If your account is vacant-I don't know how to say it...-than that's alright, but otherwise, I'm absolutely, one-hundred percent positive that everyone will support you through continuing this story. I honestly cannot put any more of my feelings towards this story into words. Just...amazing. Wow.

~Jewel
edward4king chapter 1 . 12/27/2018
Love your story! It's amazing, can you please please update!
Zanecole421 chapter 19 . 12/18/2018
I realise that it had been over a year since you have updated this story but I just wanted to say that it is amazing! The way you right is really engaging and it is just all around fabulous. I really hope it hasn't been abandoned. Could you please let me know?
Anime100 chapter 19 . 10/7/2018
This is truly interesting to read; please update very soon

I hope Edward gets freed as soon as possible
Soap234 chapter 19 . 5/28/2018
This. Is. Amazing!
MorgantheFae chapter 4 . 4/25/2018
Dumbledore knows exactly how to get a nerd to work for him. I love it. :)
NekoTora243 chapter 19 . 4/18/2018
Aw, man! I wanna read more! This is a really good story...
The Reading Elf chapter 19 . 4/5/2018
Great story! Love it!

Please continue soon!
clawfulGood chapter 19 . 3/31/2018
hey my DUDE omfg the politics are leaving me speachless I love this so much it so well written.
HoleyGrail chapter 19 . 2/27/2018
This.

THIS IS ART.

The story is incredible and I'm already hooked! I just started reading and I cannot wait for the next chapter! I love how you added Ed's illness, it just ads so much to the story and presents a ticking time bomb for the characters.
AND AHH SO MANY AMAZING SCENES
'Umbitch' was great- my gosh
And Ed talking to Winry and Al, apologizing and angst

Also- Edwin

*YES*

I love this story and cannot wait to find out how it ends!
(Hopefully on a happy note)
DracoBrony chapter 4 . 2/26/2018
The idea is amazing and I aboslutely love even if the pacing and overall flow of the story needs a little work though maybe that's just me being biased. Overall very well made.
oliviatheflamingo chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
at first i was a bit sceptical of this story. im not huge in crossovers ,butas soon as i started i imediatly loved,it.
YokaiAngel chapter 19 . 11/19/2017
amazing story!~
B-29 Bomber chapter 19 . 11/15/2017
It's a good story, but there are moments where it feels a bit disjointed.
Sylphrena33 chapter 19 . 11/16/2017
I love this story! I can't wait to read the rest! You've done a great job, and really sucked me in. Well thought out, great storyline, great emotion. I love how everything is tying in in Xerxes. I'm excited for the rest! Thank you! :)
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