Reviews for Naruto: The Herald of Death
destructo08 chapter 3 . 5/22
I kind of skimmed through this fic, so I didn't fully get everything, but that twist at the end was slightly surprising. Not fully unexpected, but you did through me for a loop with the whole "making Naruto loved by the village" and thus making me think he would have a great life, and then showing that his life was probably going to become a lot harder.

What I find funny is that in the beginning when you talked about Naruto seeing a big tree while running from dementors, I thought that was the third book of the Harry Potter series, because I thought that was the dementors protecting Hogwarts from Sirius Black and Naruto was in the forbidden forest. Then I wondered why Threstals were so bloodthirsty in this fic, because that would make them poor substitutes for horses for carrying those Hogwarts carriages if they would hurt a student if they smelled the student's blood. I also thought that the big tree he came across was the womping willow, and it was saving him because it sensed his fate to be connected to Nature in the future or something like that. Boy you threw me for a loop when you said it had a door and Death was inside. Anyways, I guess I'll never know what happens next in this fic. I wonder when you will get your next review since I am reviewing 4 years after the previous review.

Good-bye
destructo08
demon.lvr chapter 3 . 8/23/2016
This is really cool. I love how the vibe of the story is just so eerie. Definitely looking forward to reading more of this.
The Insane Kitsune chapter 3 . 6/23/2016
Really interesting can't wait to see more.
Silvermane1 chapter 3 . 3/13/2016
Poor Naruto I hope he doesn't return to lead village
Kairan1979 chapter 3 . 3/12/2016
As always, the population of Konoha displayed the same mentality we saw in the Wizardling world. Why I'm not surprised?
Paradox009 chapter 3 . 3/12/2016
THAT was completely unexpected and oh so awesome. Never in a thousand years would I have expected such a twist. You guys really need to continue this, seriously you can't stop this until the end after such a superb introduction. I hope to see more soon, so keep it coming.

Yours sincerely,
A fan
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luffy chapter 3 . 3/12/2016
can't wait to see the next chapter! though I have to admit it's not long enough
KillerZombie1121 chapter 3 . 3/12/2016
Whoa! This be like Game of Thrones... no named character is safe. Poor Ayame and Teuchi. Ichiraku population -2.
Apricia chapter 3 . 3/12/2016
I thought it will be a super awesome fict. And that thought got killed by the ending that fell splat at the bottom of fiery hell. Seemed good then just splat. Sorry if my review seems rude.
Blackseal84 chapter 3 . 3/12/2016
Ok now sh*t has hit the fan going at mach speeds I mean wow can't wait for more great work
InvisibleJediMaster chapter 3 . 3/12/2016
And my reaction to this is a resounding 'Oh crap.' That went incredibly badly. Understandably badly since they are dementors, but still.

Well written.
Serene Amarbel Asteria chapter 3 . 3/12/2016
You did what?! You did not just do that! NO! Nononononono! This is not happening!
moon so bright chapter 2 . 3/8/2016
Strange things be happening here, eh?
moon so bright chapter 1 . 3/8/2016
Interesting perspective on the shadow clone.
Kairan1979 chapter 2 . 2/29/2016
I wonder what Hidan will think if he ever meets Naruto you described.
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