Oh oh oh. This is so good. Do you not write fanfic anymore? I wish you'd come back to this story, but I also just wish you'd start writing again. You're fantastic at it.

This is fantastic. Truly. I wish you would keep it going.

I try not to get invested in stories that haven't been worked in in months. But I started this one before I read the update dates. I love this story but I'd love it even more if you updated. You've perfected all the characters and their mannerisms to a t. Please continue. This is wonderful.

Can't wait for more hope you update soon

I really hope you continue this some time!

Beautiful grasp of story and characterisation please continue

I check this story for updates with embarrassing frequency. I just love your writing, pacing, excellent characterization,everything. No pressure ;).

I have read through this at least five times. Your writing is beautiful and has a haunting-yet-gritty quality to it-you have a strong and different "voice". Keep writing!

Just found this story and I agree with the reviewer below-this is professional-caliber writing! Your characterization sand dialogue are absolutely perfect! Hope you are still writing!

Are you a professional writer?! PLEASE update soon. You write Beth and Daryl so well and the visions and feelings you convey are truly artistic.

Please continue

Great story so far! Your characters feel so right.
Back to his stomping grounds-maybe they'll go get his bike :).

I love this so much! I can't wait for more!

Great story!

You write Daryl and Beth so authentically!