Plz write more! I'm dying to know what happens!

Oh no lucy!

Boohoo, cry me a river. :( people don’t find Natsu’s character perfect. Anyways, I quite enjoyed this so far!

Typical Laxus fangirl dribble trying to make him out to be the perfect husbando while bashing Natsu. Just so you know (since you clearly didn't watch the series and aren't a real fan) Natsu brought Lucy to the guild, goes out of his way to make her happy, uprooted a tree just so she could see it and changed time for Lucy. Laxus mocked and belittled her, called her weak, blamed her for the Phatom Lord fiasco, turned her to stone, and threatened to kill her. And never apologized for any of it and barely acknowledges her existence. Now since I doubt you have the mental faculties to understand my point, I'm not saying I dislike LaLu as I do have a few in my favorites. I just thinks its childish for you to take you impotent rage out on Natsu just because you're mad your favorite crack pairing will never come true.

So tired of Lucy's fans pretending she doesn't cause just as much collateral damage as team natsu during missions and bashing them to make Laxus and his little fanclub look good.

Enjoying both this and your other story. Didn't catch they were from the same author until you mentioned it. Do hope to see the thunder legion helping Laxus with this.

This was so good I cant wait for the next chapter

As always Lucy is the favorite to kidnap.

So how bad is this smack down going to be? Hmmmmmm? And congrats on starting 100 years quest. I'm dying while I read it lol anyways I love how Laxus was trying to make her jealous like yes! Can't wait for what's next!

Hello im really enjoying your story and hope you continue!

I can’t wait for more!

Hello! Just wanted to say that your fic is one of the few in the Fairy Tail category that doesn't make me cringe unbearably. More of a Nalu person myself, this story is still very well written and bless you for your grammar. I really enjoy reading it and I hope you'll be posting soon!
I hope you are well in this weird time, all the best :)

I love you story it’s so well written and flows well. You express the characters emotions fluently, and you use excellent grammar and word choice! Keep up the good work

You're doing great! Just don't forget to go through and check spelling and grammar and stuff! You're doing an awesome job with the characters and how they interact. Keep it up!

Such a cute story so far! Please continue soon!