I recently rediscovered The Persuaders! As I began looking at old episodes I wondered if anyone had written fan fiction for this fun but unfairly short-lived show. I was so happy to find your story.

I like the way you got into Brett's head and the Saint reference me chuckle.

I think it is reasonable to assume Brett would ask these questions and is pondering of Danny seem spot on.

I always thought Sinclair rank opened doors for the pair. I am American but it would make sense that a title would allow its holder access that even a successful businessman like Danny wouldn't be privy to.

The references to actual episodes give your story an authentic feel too!

Oh wow, the mentioning of Simon Templar is really cool! I like it.

Beautiful...ROTFL the Saint reference!