This fan fiction is so accurate to the characters, thank you for making it, it was just the pick me up I needed.

Life as of now is a more slippery slope than usual. Believe it will have good moments even tho bad ones feel like the end. I'm thrilled your not deleting your fanfiction account. You may not be writing, but your already posted stories finished or not are very amusing and wonderful.

I throughly enjoyed your story!

Loved the story!

PLEASE UPDATE!

Update!

That was just great. I can't wait for more ! Please update soon.

This was AMAZING! They are now married! Wow, did turn fly but the important thing is that they are finally one! Both have waited for this day and it has finally arrived! This chapter was great! Hope Mal doesn't get pregnant right away so they can have a bit more fun! Hmm, wonder how old they are here? Anyway, great work as always and can't wait for more!

Carlos "broking"'whatever it was good boy fixing/replacing it. Otherwise, Bal would have sent your mother a boy skin coat. Belle & Mal's last minute talk made me tear. Doug & Ben's talk nice one Doug. Plus you & Evie take your time. ;-)
Evie maid of honor OF COURSE, Doug best man TOO RIGHT & Carlos walking Mal down adorable. Evie, Ben eventually will rip clothes off his Mal that you can't "save". (Wicked Smirk) BAL FINALLY MAKING LOVE (fainted) That was perfect with a little hint of primal, Ben beautiful. (Again Wicked Smirk)

Wow... I regret that it took me this long to notice this story. Like thebigdog2895 said, one of the best Descendants stories on here. Lemon or not, just the raw emotions you write, it's incredible and oh so realistic. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

One of the Best Descendents fanfics I've read in a while, and not just because of the lemon. This is really sweet and emotional. You capture Ben and Mal's thoughts and emotions beautifully. I'm working on my own Bal fanfic myself, but it definitely doesn't compare nearly as good as yours! Excellent job and keep up the wonderful work! Hope for another chapter soon'

This just keeps getting better and better and I love that they are taking their time with all this! It's amazing to see this beautiful couple slowly lose their virginity and the real moment (whenever that is) will be just AWESOME! Can't wait to see what dirty games they'll come up with later! Bal forever!

OH MY CHERRY BLOSSOMS! That can't (please) get any sweet/hot/sexy! (Fainted)
Ben's inner beast loves to play with his mate & Mal her vixen wicked ways knows how to make him go wild. (Wicked Smirk)
They will love/cherish one another until the day they die. (Tears of joy)

That was AMAZING! On of the best "mature" Bal stories I read and it was just beautiful in language and setting and everything! And they are still taking their time but the are teasing each other and loving each other in great and beautiful ways. So great! Keep it up! I'm DYING to know what comes next!

Mal getting that 'talk' with Belle was awkward yet highly necessary. They are particularly mother/daughter already, if what transits now proves any of that. (Wicked Smirk)
Evie with the note & small bikini well Mal won't kill her. Just a huge talking too.
When Mal said "break my barrier" well she got Ben between excited/scared. (Naughty thoughts) Mal enjoying herself was well as Ben hey it's not a crime. Yet worth all that pleasurable time. :-P