| Reviews for Yo-Kai Journey |
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Paxman19 chapter 18 . 5/31 Thank you so much you truly are the greatest fanfic writer ever don't let anyone tell you otherwise. |
Paxman19 chapter 13 . 5/31 So I know I said I wasn't going to review but I just can't help it, first off Frostina (Not Blizzaria), Cupistol, and the casa-brothers are three of my favorite yo-kai and you just made me love them even more (even Casanuva despite the way he is acting). And second I may not really support Frostina and Blazion but as a netural party in the ship you did pretty good as on how they would sort of work out. |
Paxman19 chapter 12 . 5/31 I want to say more but I told myself I would stop reviewing so much but here it is... Cliffhangers might just be your style of writing and I like it. Unlike the actual anime this is much more plot driven. |
Paxman19 chapter 10 . 5/30 Okay I was way off you are such an amazing writer your plot is incredible like none I have ever seen I should have known you were this good because of your other stories. You included Hailey, yokai fusion, and a bit of past. You are so far the best fanfic writer I have ever seen. I was going to say Hailey was occ but then you pulled the running gag and I just though she would totally ship them. All in all this was great. I really never doubted you, just you confused me with this whole Oni rampage thing. It may take you a while to write but that doesn't mean you are not good. your writing so far is as perfect as a gemnyan. this was for the last chapter by the way. |
Paxman19 chapter 9 . 5/30 nevermind this was better and again I should have seen this coming. |
Paxman19 chapter 8 . 5/30 Okay I am sorry for my last review I should have known they were under control, but I do have a note. I feel like this would have been a good time to summon kyubi since he goes so well with Venoct plus it would have been cool to see him in action other than that good job and I like how you added eddie and bear into the mix. |
Paxman19 chapter 6 . 5/30 I get you were a bit desperate for Plot but Gargaros is more of a guardian Yokai who just has a bit of a short fuse when it comes to both People and Yokai being bad. I get why you had to do it and I do have to say for your knowledge of Yokai watch you did good but it would have been more interesting to see Slimamander or Massiface. |
Paxman19 chapter 1 . 5/30 Well I know it is a little late for suggestions but I do have quite a bit of praise, you did a pretty good job. so far you have set up a good plot, you have character and dialog right, your grammar was pretty good with only a few errors. Thank you for this story and it was nice to find this after reading two of your other stories you are very skilled. |
Switch 4 Life chapter 14 . 6/16/2019 Oh yeah, speaking of which, I just began writing my "Mega Man Star Force x Yokai Watch" weeks ago. You should check it out. |
SushiGamer10 chapter 20 . 3/24/2019 What the heck DUDE?I read 19 chapters just to be told this story is discontinued.I already read new yo-kai journey but that was just a rewrite of yo-kai journey you please make chapter 20 for yo-kai journey that's not a disclaimer?Yeesh, I kinda disapprove but all the 19 chapters were pretty good. |
SushiGamer10 chapter 10 . 3/22/2019 This story is great so far.I love YKW romance and NatexKatie and I love sushi and such romance in a up the great work on your fanfic storys! |
Guest chapter 20 . 1/29/2019 Please continue the stories! You can't just leave us with a cliff hanger just when it was getting so exciting! This new version better be worth it or please continue Yo-kai Journey! |
Oragonking chapter 20 . 5/29/2018 You already saw the new series of Yo-Kai Watch Shadowside? It's seems that Nate does end up marrying with Katie! Also, don't you find it strange? That the reason Nate can no longer see Yo-kai is because he has become an adult, but that's impossible since Nate's grandmother, Lily, can still see Yo-kai. |
bluesharky chapter 20 . 5/29/2018 While I am sad your not going to finish this story, I am glad that you are remaking it. But let me say that this story has been a true inspiration to me, and is probably one the main reasons I still like yokai watch. With that said, I'm sure your going to do a great job with your upcoming work. :) I wish you good fortune on your remake, and thanks again for always checking out my story :D Chao. |
Whisper-is-best chapter 19 . 4/23/2018 Yeah me again and no rush but... .UP. ... I'm just kidding take your time with finishing the chapter. Well bye. |