I would hesitantly ask you to update this because it looks fun but it's barely been started.

please update!

Having not being around the first time, I can't wait to see the duelling club in action! Thanks for sharing!

Aw, I liked your first version too :) I really like how you write Theo, you do such a good job of depicting his various worries and wants. So the dueling club is getting ready to start. I'm looking forward to see what changes you make and what you keep.

Since I already reviewed the first chapter before I had to write this review while a guest, but I still wanted to leave you one for the rewritten chapter :)

Oh I do love this. It started out already so different and so similar and so strong and so set. I can't even articulate what I feel but I'm excited to see how it goes.

Love this story!

Hey, BonaFake.
It's Slythindork.
I apologize for the lateness of my review; real life has been hectic.
BUT, like always, I enjoyed this chapter. However, you might want to pick up the pace (of the story) a little. Since there is a war going on(kind of), I would like to see a bit more of (NOT snake-faced Tom because I ship Tomione. Not here, of course. Theomione is adorable.) Tom.
Anyways,I'm ranting, aren't I? I read your note and am glad you decided to organize your story before going on; there's no need for speed. (Also, do take your time. Don't rush because you feel like you need to; there's zero pressure.)
Slythindork

Draco is such a little gossip. lol Hermione and Theo are such a cute couple, and I had to laugh at Hermione wondering if Theo liked having sex as much as she did. Duh, he's a teen boy, he loved it! I really like how you have Hermione enjoying herself and playing coy. I don't know why any of them would believe or trust Voldemort anyway, glad they're working on that issue. Smart idea to use the power of the press. Great chapter :)

Wow! You updated! I was super excited when I got the email, but my phone was taken from me back then. That explains my late review.
This line "Inbred, ignorant, ancient, imbeciles that couldn't get their heads out of their arses long enough to pass a bill that gave health care to victims of Babbling Birth" really got me! I mean, you wrote the lines of truth! (I think that is my favorite line)
And then, the Alchemists let Pansy go wild! I was laughing when I saw what Pansy did. I now know why I LOVE Pansy. (The books portrayed her as a person that was not that pleasant)
At last, I only realized what the "Harry Pansy and Draco" problem was when Theo said it out loud. A Harry/Pansy/Draco triad? That is something new! I look forward to it. ( Pany is a lucky, lucky, girl *wink wink*)
Good job with this chapter!
Slythindork

The Wizengamot is really full of losers. LOL They don't seem to be able to get anything done but I'm sure if it's beneficial to them it gets accomplished. Corrupt idiots. Glad to have Pansy added to the group, I really like how you're writing her :) So a trio of Harry, Draco, and Pansy would be quite interesting. Poor Harry would be in the middle when Draco and Pansy would argue, and you know their would be some fierce ones :D I really like how Theo thinks so much of Hermione, he really needs someone like her in his life. She'll be loyal and vicious in defending him :) So like Hermione to initiate their first time ;) Great chapter!

Finally they fucked, the sexual tension between them was so intense. I hope theo fuck her often. lol

YAAAAYYYY Theo and Hermione finally got rid of some of the sexual tension! And now people have acknowledged Draco's mindset, and Voldemort's nefarious plans, I'm excited for alll this to blow up! (X anywaaays this was a great chapter and I loved it.

I loved this chapter, Harry's pov is great and its great to see how much hes thinking about Draco and Pansy, when he finally works it out it'll be soooo great. Anywwaaays its a great chapter and I can't wait for the next one.

Yes! You updated! Good job and love to you!
I love how you brought in modern psychology. It was great!
A question: if you bring in modern stuff, will you bring in modern weapons?
Oh, and please tell us what happens to Theo and Draco.
Sorry if this review is short. School has started and homework is a nightmare.
Slythindork

That was a really unique way of having Hermione instruct them, using specific parts of the brain. Very cool, I don't think I've ever read that before. Luna really pummeled poor Harry's brain. I'm very curious about Harry's dream of Voldemort's anger. Draco's unhappiness bout Harry's relationship is something I can't wait for Draco's POV on to find out what's behind it. Can't wait to find out what happened at the Ministry. I've probably already mentioned it but I really love the alternating POV's for each chapter :)

I'm excited for me and you!