Thanks!

Oooofffffff cool beanzzzzzzzzs love it hawt xx

Thanks for participating in our contest! :)

OhGee! Edward was such an ass and sure knows how to get to this Bella, which made it a frustrating yet fun read. At least she gives it right back to him! Thanks for entering the CPS Contest!

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Becca

I absolutely LOVE this OS, it's a very hot one. Mmmmmmm ! And I would like to know more about Bella. You opened a part of Edward's life with Tanya, It would be great to know Bella's past. Thank you for sharing and if you write more ,I want to be part of it.

Continue please!

Very well done! A true OS. Didn't see many of them in this contest. It was well written, fun AND hot. Loved your in-charge Edward.

Daaamn! Very hot!

i am sorry, but is Bella being used for sex? it seems like that. sorry but i did not enjoy this one bit. seemed like a very cruel Edward taking advantage of a very vulnerable Bella. but hey, this is my opinion.

OMG! It was soooo good! Love this mechanic Edward really much... How he played his cards with bella! well done! Hope Ill read some more about This in the future since Edward give away some issues he had in the past...? As well as this tough Bella! Good luck! Hope you win

I liked that. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Hehehe... Loved both of them, feisty & hot! Lol

Wow! This Mase is something else, just like your B and bluehaired A! I loved your detailed descriptions, all facettes of your characters, at least those you let us see for now.
Although one could somehow imagine where this is going, I would love to read more of them and their way to "romance".
Great writing! Perfect narrating style. You managed the fine line between seduction and persuasion and made what could've easily went into abuse of a poor girl's predicament, into an exciting, banterfilled sexual encounter that was pleasant for both participants. I would love to see his controlling demeanor crumble and fall to submission. Thank you and good luck for this contest!

Bella's van, that whore, keeps needing a tune up. Lucky b****. I need more.

Wow, please continue this story!