This is the worst story ever created

What a terrible endingn

Nice story I hope theres a sequel at some point to see what happens in New York

pretty damn good story man and I was happy to see it was complete. bit then you left it on a cliffy and I was super bumbed there wasnt a sequel. I really hope you put one up so we can finish our the story arc.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story and I am eager to see if there is a sequel. :)

I hope this story isn't the reason you stopped writing. It absolutely destroyed me to read this story so I can't imagine how you felt writing it. But I was so looking forward to an epilogue where they get a happily ever after, that would have made the soul-destroying read worth it.

Just gotta say... the villain... I actually saw that coming when Kingsly gave Harry permission for Avalon. The way Harry talked about her and losing track of her... my prediction, however, did not make it any less of a surprise as I kept wondering "when the hell is she gonna show up finally?" lol Well played.

This isn't quite a favorite, but it was a decent story nonetheless. I'd have liked to see a bit more where they perhaps work through their issues and maybe leave on a grand tour or something, but this does work.

This has been interesting so far, but no one is ever going to make a phone that is intended as a phone electrocute people. The risk of someone activating that function or of something going wrong and it somehow activating is just unacceptable, not to mention you'd have to include circuits to boost the voltage up to lethal levels, which would make the phone bigger, or reduce battery life. Now the phone could lock itself permenanty, send an alert with your gps coordinates, brick itself by wiping everything, but not lethal electric shock. Hell, if a competitor of Stark's knew he did that, they would hire stupid people to steal the phone and make sure its someplace its filmed, then Stark gets thrown in jail for murder charges.

You make Ginny look like dumbledore while Harry looks like a brand new wizard completely bs

Bat getting raped was completely unnecessary

Kingsley is an ass of enormous proportions not remotely excused by politics and I hope Harry gets a chance to punch him later. I think it would be very satisfying.

Hey! So I LOVE this story and I've searched all over your stories list and I'm SOOOOO bummed that you haven't posted the "sequel." Idc if its a ONE SHOT, just PLEASE tell me what happens next! Does Clint confront Harry about "Why the HELL doesn't Tasha remember anything because he has a phone full of txts from her all about Harry" or does Tasha take the memories and agonize for days about whether or not she wants to look at them? Does she remember and then they have wild, passionate, reunion sex? I NEED TO KNOW! Please?

Absolutely loved this story, the exploration of the different mystical elements was amazing! Going to go read whatever’s next right now

I've got no clue if you ate still around, but I thought you should know that I absolutely adored this story.