you ever gonna write what happens next anytime soon? it's been like what a couple years now?

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recien encontré esta historia y me encantó, siguela por favor

I found this story and I'm glad I did however I can't help but be annoyed with how Gohan was continually surpassed time and time again in this story. He really didn't have any shining moments, this was really all about Cooler and then randomly Trunks even though Gohan has suffered more then anyone in this story. Great story, but as a Gohan fan this has been a huge disappointment. Hopefully you finish this one day so we can get the conclusion.

A fascinating story! I love it

Im not going to lie I was enjoying this, until it started to just hit the same rungs as the normal cell saga, it would have been ok to have cooler ice cell and Duke it out with Gohan. It would have been ok to have Gohan and cooler defeat perfect cell together, but to have the whole and "now trunks is Ssj2" just kind of killed it for me. It's like checking you off a checklist of Canon things you think need to happen. Also not big on the change to coolers fifth form i get not wanting to go gold cooler, since hed just roflestomp everyone but his new form just sounds less awesome looking.

The ending of this chapter seemed pretty rushed

Once again I just wanted to say very impressive work, you give a ton of depth to every one involved,e very person and very factions has their own life in this story and their own goals and methods that make it truly enthralling to read, kudos!

Hi there, I just started reading this story and wanted to say how impressed I am with your world building, descriptions and skill at creating distinct voices for everyone, the arrival of Coolers armored form is perfectly timed with Cell and it all together rocks, kudos!

This is a fantastic story. Your folding of different parts of the Dragon Ball universe into this bold new interpretation is incredible. I'm looking forward to more.

figured what with two chapters left cell wasn't out yet been an all right story wonder what the sequel will be like? hmm well hopefully it'll be as interesting as this one's been.

I love this.

This is really great. I love how you're using side characters and even characters that Z forgot about.

I went away and came back to so much interesting development. :D Please don't give up~ in the meantime let me squeal till I'm coherent enough to review :D

It's going to be funny and ironic as hell if Gohan ends up getting a cybernetic prosthetic arm.