You can't know how excited I was when I came back to and found that you had updated this wonderfully written story with more chapters! The last chapter I had read was chapter seven and I've been hooked on your story ever since. Soooo happy you didn't abandoned it and have come back! Consider yourself hugged tightly and possibly jostled about as I jump for joy! ;D lol Your story is one of my favorite Fili/Oc fics and I positively love Tori.

Each and every chapter has been gold, a pleasure to read and filled with grins, laughs and that warm flutter in the heart when Fili draws closer to Tori. I can melt sometimes and sigh within my romantic haze of the two. Love your story so much!

P.s. That ENDING was hilarious! I'm so with Fili. How DARE he! Well, NEVER have I read of anyone socking an elf, let alone Elrond himself and he so had it coming. I applaud and laughed out loud. *two thumbs up* Go Tori! I think Thorin would be proud when he hears of what happened, a little hidden smirk. hahaha Looking forward to the next installment. :D

I have just found myself to be in love with this story and I hope you update it again soon!

Tori has so much she is having to deal with. Also, the ending of this had me cackling. Honest. I love this so so much. Hope you are staying safe!

Ah love this!

Loved it

hahaha yeah girl

yay! thank you so much for the update~~
nz has only been in quarantine for a week but it's great when i have something new to read :D

Fantastic story

Hello there,

Great to hear from you, learn you're fine and get another amazing chapter. You haven't disappointed yet again. :) I still feel charmed with every new thing that happens in the plot. Not only that, your ideas still manage to aim perfectly into my own likings.
It would be amazing for you to add some description of dwarves seeing her sacking the Elf lord. I mean, seriously, that was an ingenious and truly unexpected way to finish the chapter. Although, I believe all males would beg to differ. ;)

When it comes to the current world situation, I actually envy you. I am forced to go to my job very day having no way to work at home. It's kind of bitter-sweet that there is no traffic so I can drive both way thrice as fast. Then again, it means most people are staying safely at home. BUT then again, half of them are left jobless. So yeah. No good solution except for hoping for the best in the coming weeks.

Stay safe! Hope to hear from you soon!

I love your story so far please update soon!

This is great!

Hello, there. I just want you to know I was aware about this new present you gave us right after it was out. My last few days consisted of work, family and falling asleep right after being free. I could only enjoy your new chapter via phone - which is nightmarish when it comes to writing a review. I might not have been able to write a review right away but please be aware I truly enjoyed your newest update. I received so many new chapter from one of my fav fanfics I thought to be dropped. : )
No matter how many times I read this part, I'm left confused. Nori's and Dori's "five feet apart" was about the warg or about Tori and Fili being in each other's space?
I love the way you decided to approach the subject of Tori and her elves kin - although, I'm not really sure how did that happen for Nori and her to avoid elves altogether while travelling. Nevertheless, the way you imagined seems the most fitting.
So I'm sorry again for being late and thank you so much for this update and not disappointing yet again. :)

Guest “S”. The story is lovely and your writing is wonderful. I am sorry if I put you off by mentioning the water flow. I just kept having the mental picture of Fili and Tori sitting in a mess of scalding mud at the end.
The scene was a vivid description to cause that much detail in my mind. Look forward to seeing what they find in Imladris.
Guest “S”

Oh my goodness. First of all, the Ri siblings are the best thing ever. All the sass, but family love too. Also Tori and Fili are so darn smitten with each other that I just can stand how cute it is. I was shocked at Thorin apologizing. Honestly floored. I cannot wait for Rivendell! As usual, the whole chapter was amazing!

I love it so much! I completely forgot the elves to be perfectly honest, oh what is Elrond gonna say?! update soon pretty please333