Cool story! Look forward to the next update. :)

muhahahaha serves you right Dumb as a door

cool update soon thanks

Dumbledore is one crazy mother f****** bastard to think that about doing those things to children. Raping, stealing,and other things

Omg! I so love this story and can't wait to read more! Kudos to Snape for taking the initiative about the horcruxes! Also I'm wondering how Dumbledore will try to retaliate? My first guess is going after the Dursleys and trying to find out how things went wrong for him. Can't wait for the next chapter!

cool upsdate soon thanks

cool update soon thanks

cool update soon thanks

nice to see a story start now to help
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Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Is there a reason that you put chapter 3 up as chapter 5.

hope you continue soon, there's a bunch you can write about next Snape's reaction to the apology, Ron's deceit , the headmasters freak out to his plans getting messed up/his new plans, the students response to LV and a teacher dying, does their government or law enforcement get involved, getting use to classes etc...

That will mess up a lot of plans. Susan writing her aunt to ask about the third floor, Voldemort and the mind reading would too. I always wonder why she didn't. You grow up with a cop, you think like a cop.

They are off to a good start.

Percy does not have the patience to be a Prefect!

I like that they brought muggle things. And look forward to seeing what other muggle things they have sent.

Ron is in for much disappointment and No money!

I like everything about this chapter!