Most interesting reads for me in this 2020

Please update again :(

im so relieved its not dead. this fic is one of my favs

I want to encourage you to continue writing I know how hard it is to get back in there. I have one I need to finish as well.

I just found this story! I love it I hope you update soon!

I’ve been playing with this idea in my head this past few days! If someone (and I was pinning on Seth) imprinted on an older person (I even though about 21/22).
Now here’s the thing, even with an imprint (which you didn’t really emphasize/gave in depth feels that it happened. Like WE know because we know how it works. But still wanna read about that connection.), she’s still a 21 year old. A 21 year old mind would not want to be a pedophile or even wanna touch a young-en with a ten foot stick. So that dance sickened me a little bit.
Now that would have created more content. His desire to get to know her.
The imprint has, if I remember corrected 4 stages. One is if the person is young, they’re a protector and a friend. Which is Jacob’s case. But you can think the same way in this case. Walking the thin line between getting to know her as a friend and wanting to become lovers. With the social stigma of why an older women want a young guy with a hot body.
Just a thought.
Just my opinion, your writing style is rushed. There’s no feeling in it.
“I could see Dad making French toast. Mom was drinking a coffee, watching him. Even after all these years she still looked at him like that. That's the kind of love I always wanted. It seemed so pure and innocent.”
I don’t want to be told these facts. I want to feel the emotions as I read about their actions. “Mom was occasionally smiling into her cup of coffee as she watched dad make breakfast.” Something like that.
I just scrolled through and there wasn’t anything in the wording that made me want to slow down and enjoy.
I clicked because of the idea, but I might not continue because of the content.

i'm sorry for your loss and happy that you're able to find solace in your writing

Please update! I love this story

Okay... So this story has tons of potential. But what just bugs me a little is how the sentences are constructed way too short.

Examples would be:

I put some grits in the now boiling water. I put some bacon in the pan.

When you can say I put some grits in the now boiling water before moving to the other side of the stove to place some bacon on a frying pan. or something to that effect.

Doing that rids the redundancy of I put.

Another one would be..

I whispered his name. He moved my hair to the other side of my neck. He placed a kiss to my neck.

While you can say...
I whispered his name as he moved my hair to the other side of my neck, giving way for him to kiss a spot on the exposed side.

So that's about it. Maybe just a personal preference of mine as a reader. One that you may want to explore as a writer.I hope it helps and doesn't offend. Your story is still interesting regardless and I hope you continue this

Ok so I absolutely love this story for ohhh so many reasons. Truly you're doing the dang thing. Please don't stop writing this. Seth and Storm. Love it

Omg what a great story so far. This is truly becoming one of my favorite stories. Please update soon.

Please update when you get the chance! i'm in love with this story 3

Loveee this story

Update soon! Loved the chapter!

I'm finally reading this and catching up!