Very good but i really think xcom on earth sould be reactivated and start doing stuff

Okay your doing well. But u need to explain. Why the aliens want to protect earth so bad and it would be nice if xcom got involved in this.

Thanks and keep up the good work

Good job did not expect vipers to come in. And maybe you could bring xcom in the mix of this because earth just got hit by a laser.

Also please stop having the commander calling our main character by her full name he should either give her a nickname or just call her by her first name.

Last also your gonna need an explanation of why the defences did nothing,

Thanks and keep up the good work.

Pretty good so far but you need to remember to use the other alien races other then the sectoids mainly and maybe have an etheral sometime later on