This story is really good. I like how, when you explain the plot, it goes and sounds fast but the story is strangely paced. This is a compliment, i really don't know how to explain it.

dude this made me cry both sad and happy tears uncontrollably

This is so good!
Especially how it made you want to come back and read the next chapter!

Ahhhhhhhh all my uwu's have been stolen, my wig gone, I am dehydrated from my tears being gone and ah I can't this was so freaking cuuuute oh my lord my heart it bursting out of my heart from sadness that it's over but happiness in reading this ahh I love. Thank you for making me feel like a child again reading fanfics late at night. 3

Okay but this was soo good. I don't know why but the way you put the theatre part was so well that I actually got butterflies before Ness got to acting. I don't know what it's like to be a main but hopefully when it happens it's just like this. This made me appreciate theatre more lmao and the character development... Very good my dude.

I'd just like to say, I love the theatre part of this. even though most won't relate I think it's the story that counts. believe me, from not being a theatre kid to being one, I still enjoyed it the same way in both time periods. Today I still enjoy this because you have a really good way of describing the story where I can feel their emotions. I want to give kudos to you. And you know what, theatre fucking rules. and I hope that you still look into more things with theatre.

Omg! This was so good! I stayed up until nearly 10am to finish reading this in one sitting. I’m tired as hell now, but this fic was really fucking good!
I can’t fully describe how much I loved this without writing a story-length review lol. I usually browse Ao3 but I decided to give this site a shot for EB fics and I’m glad I did! Such an amazing story!
I loved the way everyone was written here. The angst and fluff was balanced in such a nice way, and the dialogue was funny as hell.
Amazing work!

this sucks balls

your story is really good! v

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AAAAAAAAA 3 I LOVE YOUR FIC! 333

(Sorry, i don't speak english.)

¡Me encantó! ¡Dios! ¡Fue tan hermosa! ¡Tan dramática! No sé cuántas veces quise meterme en la historia para darle un golpe e insultar a Ness xD.
Su actitud de mierda fue demasiada que en algún punto consideré que no quería ver a Ness con Luke xdddd.

Poor Lucas :'u (? Me daba mucha pena que alguien tan maravilloso (y hermoso(?) como él no recibiera amor :((((((((((((((

Me molesté demasiado con la actitud homofóbica de Ness. Digo, ¡¿ES EN SERIO?! ¿¡TE AVERGÜENZAS DE LUKE?! ¡La persona que literalmente te salvó!

Me gustó mucho tu fan-fic :'DDD 333

That whole story was amazing but the last line was just perfect it was the best story I have ever had the pleasure of reading good job just good job I am looking forward to reading more of your stories in the near future.

I decided to reread the entire thing from start to finish, and it was quite the emotional ride that I half-regret doing early in the day since your writing will be all I can think about for a long while. Let me give you a proper review by saying you have quite an amazing talent for writing, better than my own if I may be so humble.

The progression of friendships and into relationships is all so reasonably fluid, and unquestionably engaging as I read on. Though it might just be me being a fast reader, I did notice the pace graze at a few parts in the late chapters, but you recovered well with plenty of development for each of the many characters you've included as appropriate. I'd be lying if I said I didn't exhale hard so many times whenever I felt like screaming on the inside. I'd say the most I felt in such a way was each time Ness acted like an ass, which was plenty of times.

It's difficult to indulge in more specifics, as there are so many things I hated screaming and clawing the air for (but in a respectfully admiring manner) in this story...and marathoning the entire story was a bad idea for my weary mind and eyes. All in all, the ride was definitely intense, but it ended in a comforting conclusion with Nesscas. I'm glad to have read such an amazing, well-written piece created by you. Keep up the great work in the future, friendo!

Best nesscas fanfiction in my opinion also 100th review :)

the writing was amazing and its so hard to find a good nesscas fic thats recent too omggg