Okay, this is sad but it's a little fast paced I think..
I like how you potrayed Jyuushi as the sun of the matsu's brother, I NEED MORE FIC LIKE THIS!

But honestly I think it's kind of weird if jyuushi choose to trust the bully rather than talking it with his brother, then again that's the point of the story :P

well... so far so good... but 'neesan' is for sister not brother... you got it right in chapter 6 or 5 (i dont remember it) after all but you make a mistake in chapter 7...

I. LOVE. IT!

-Author-Chan achievement unlocked-

*Kill all readers reading from sadness unlocked*

i loved this.
By "i might to make another one similar to this", do you mean you might do another bullying fic with one of the brothers?
If so, may i suggest ichimatsu? It'd make sense 'cause of the cat stuff. You don't have to, it is just a suggestion

i really like this W can't wait to read on!

Krista you killed me.

Why u make me cry T_T

It's off to a very nice startI like the pace of the story so far, hope you keep it up like this!