Nice going genius, lets just carry the body snatching necklace around. God; if you're going to suicide, do it where you won't bother anyone. MC is so discourteous.

your OC feels very real, like, she's dealing with everything how i think actual people would. Because in basically all SI fics the OCs always acclimate really easily and are super happy to be part of a new world, but what about the loss and disinterest? When do these fictional characters start becoming real people in your mind? I really like your story a lot and can't wait for the next chapter :)

I seem to somewhat comprehend what I've stumbled into, and I am disappointed in myself. I should have seen it coming sooner. Let me guess, she is the masterpiece of a monster painter, kind of Frankenstein's sorry creation? And that is what is inserted into Harry Potters horror world? As if he needed extra madness and more people to blame him for what he could not help?
No, thank you.
No, in my name, no, for the sake of poor Harry.
Sorry you have it so bad.
I cannot help, so no need for me stick around. No good comes of this, only pain for everybody.

yo this is really cool, your Oc is definitely unique and its refreshing

I notice the commentators who doesn't understand where she is coming from emotionally. As someone who has struggled with severe depression and high anxiety, I must say that she makes perfect sense to me and her character resonates with me so much that, at times, I find myself crying while reading.
Though, if you don't get the character, or perhaps find her a bit exasperating, just be glad for that.

Thank you for your writing

Why exactly is she not trying to save at least Cedric's life if not make Harry's future easier? I understand that she is suffering, but that is no excuse.

Nice job on this chapter and story!

Huh? She is afraid? I never saw that coming. Just to let you know how incomprehensible Victoria is to me. I thought she had a happy life before, so happy that she could not forgive the forces that be for depriving her of that life. Now I hear she was never a decent person, she had a love that was hateful and hurtful and with a bad man.
And what was that with accusing Harry of bringing harm to Cedric?
I don't get it. It does not resonate with me, so I cannot intuit what Victoria feels, and what you are saying is contradictory, piece by insufficient piece.

I can't easily empathize, because my pathology is different, so I don't really understand Victoria's motivation for living 11 years so far in this way. If she thinks she cannot change things, why does she think so? Somehow I don't expect this to be so easy. She is obviously already changing things. Cedric did not have a Victoria in the books. Hopefully you will explain Victoria to us differently flawed.
Errors to be corrected if you ever get to editing the story:
TOMB is a grave, TOME is a book.
WHOM does not go just anywhere. There are rules. Rather complicated, if nobody ever explained or you never cared to learn, but using it where WHO should stand is telling. Not good for aspiring writers.

It gives a.. picture of her story and utilizes all of the sense. Very fine, author!

So much edge

oooh wow! Brilliant chapter!

Damn, that was a hella good chapter. You're getting better at the spiraling-into-the-darkness sort of episodes she has. I enjoy them. They're so tastefully tragic lol. Can't say I'm not familiar with depression. You capture it well. Unlike me and others though, Vicky is in so much denial it's crazy. I've reread the entire story since you updated and I was hoping we'd come to a part where she has en encounter with Snape. I just love the little head to heads they have with each other. Crazy good chapter. Please keep up the good work! Stay awesome!

I hope she stays depressed. She’s most interesting this way

Welllllll shit just flipped the table and hit the fan. Wonder if the wizarding world has any record of past lives?