boi...BOI! You said till next week mate...have you abandoned this? Cause I swear fucking hell, this is too good to be abandoned...please continue this...And i honestly don't think Hisoka is OOC at all...

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*sCREAMS*

HOLY ASDFGHJ...This definitely seems like Hisoka, you've captured and written him so well in this...So entertaining.

I know it's been almost two years already, but boy, I really hope you revisit this story! It's honestly one of my favorite fanfics. You write Hisoka so well, to actually make a romance with him believable. And Natsumi is an awesome character, so full of depth and feist. The dynamic between them is great and I really want to see where you take it!

love this ! pls update soon

, awww, so cute kid Hisoka... 3 3 3

Pls update

update soon!

when will you update?

I actually like what you have done to the characters! Also I kind of like the fact that this chapter was a little longer than normal. Loved this one!

I mean, I really, really, reaaaallllllyyyy would like to see Hisoka be...nice, as you put it. But I'm finding it difficult to envision him ever acting that way. If he couldn't feel anything for his mother, I think it would be hard for him to feel anything for Natsumi, too. Then again, anything could happen. He could begin to feel a nagging or tugging for Natsumi, and then decide if he wants to act upon the feelings or not...maybe even question them. Only you know, Bitchi-usa! There's my random, unimportant rambling. Thanks for the update.

I'm finally all caught up! Life's been busy. Anyway, another great chapter! I absolutely love your Hisoka, he's spot on to his character.

oh... my... glob... again with the cliff hanger... nonetheless... I LOVED IT! I love that you've added Illumi, and you're description of him was spot on. can't WAIT for the next update!

I want To be hugged by hisoka too