Reviews for The First Rule of Being a Princess
Guest chapter 2 . 4/16/2019
Squee! Happy dance! That was such a good story! Great sex and then such a cute ending!
CarolinePar chapter 1 . 5/25/2017
This is more admiration than critique or mechanical.
Wow...
I like this very much.
To share of themselves and this story is a combined delight between two characters on a whole level of fan fiction but should be their ultimate reality.
Excellent!
guest chapter 2 . 10/18/2016
Amazing sequel! Their feelings before and after their lovemaking were wonderful and what he said about the ring was so nice. I see that Miranda covered Sofia. I like that you chose to write the reaction of the family in a good and accepting way. I agree with you, although I like the angst fics too, it was nice to see a different approach. Amber was awesome and Rolland's speech was touching.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/9/2016
Oh god, where do I begin? This story is so beautiful, and tender and sexy, and adorable. And just oh so full of love. So much love, all kinds. It plays out like a fairy tale and you know what, thank you for that! I love a good angst here and there, but this is Disney and we're allowed to just have ridiculous happiness with no strings attached. Loved the Aladdin, Flynn and Kristoff shout-outs. Brava! All the cookies and all the love!
N Harmonic chapter 1 . 6/8/2016
That was intense. Even without all the gory details of sex, that was epic and passionate. Good job!
Name Annymoss chapter 2 . 4/27/2016
Otoko! Never knew Sofia the First fanfics were This Good. Wow!
Lucyole chapter 2 . 2/25/2016
wow i love it that was very beautiful and sweet.
TheLast InfiniumScribe chapter 2 . 2/2/2016
Hmm. Though a (reluctant) fan of the show (sisters)and not a particular fan of the Cedric/Sofia ship, I have to say...
With this, I am impressed. The amount of love in the...well, love-scene that you managed to convey, not to mention everywhere else in the story, was marvelous. This was obviously a tribute to something in this ship that attracts people who love it, like you. And while I personally may not subscribe to C/S, I do respect it for your story. Well done.
bluegreenferriswheel chapter 2 . 2/2/2016
that was so nice i wish it were real
Jessibelle811 chapter 2 . 1/31/2016
"Even dressed she looked wild and thoroughly fucked." Ha! Yes!
I liked this version of Cedric and Sofia's happily ever after. To be honest doing the whole "they can't be together because of their positions in life" is a bit of a stretch. One I enjoy tackling, but still a stretch given the Disney canon. More princess and princes have married non-royalty than not. I believe Sofia's parents would consent to her wishes to marry for love.
Fantastic writing. I hope you post more stories in the future. :)
BennyBun chapter 2 . 1/31/2016
Love it love it love it This is by far one of the best if not THE best Cedfia story I have ever read. I'm so looking forward to your Next one. Ah-mazing!
Jessibelle811 chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
"That she would fight to her last breath before she let the darkness take him." I think I just died a little ... and almost cried.
And ... Holy. Fricken. Hell. That was hooooooot! I have been longing for a Cedfia lemon like this. Thank you, thank you, thank you! It just goes to show that you don't need to detail every motion and moment of a love scene to make it powerful. Your mastery of language made the details of their lovemaking so vivid and lovely. Their love for one another is palpable.
Romanticlocopie chapter 2 . 1/31/2016
So sweet! I loved this and the other story so much! I would love to read more of your stories!
BennyBun chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
Wowowo that was...I don't know Beautiful isn't even close to what I want to say. They are perfect. And the ring scene? Just perfect. I'm speechless. Thank you so much for posting such a beautiful story. You made ne love Cedfia even more!