Reviews for Whitlock's Army Brat: Violent Beginnings
Fantasywoman chapter 1 . 1/13
Hallo,
die Geschichte ist wirklich toll! Hoffe, du schreibst eine Fortsetzung.
JimmyHall24 chapter 1 . 7/13/2018
Ooooo.

Interesting.
MilkiMochi chapter 17 . 6/16/2018
I still love this story even after 2 years. I don't even know if you ever plan on releasing the sequel to this story but just I had to comment about how amazing it is. The entire setup of this story was done extremely well which is a hard thing to find in the fanfiction world.
TwilightGirlAtHeart chapter 17 . 12/17/2017
You should write a sequel
Nappy51 chapter 17 . 2/13/2017
Love the story. Will there be more in the series? Hope so as this POF will be lots of fun to read.
WerewolfLover91 chapter 17 . 7/3/2016
Sad to see this story end, but looking forward to the next story!
caseyrn12 chapter 17 . 6/30/2016
i love this WHOLE set up/ idea...tabby getting the whitlock and cullen locket was a very nice touch..i love how u had carlisle talk with jasper first as he was the head of 'his' coven..i also love how u had carlisle hand the crests out..and showed their reactions ...i cant wait to see the next series of installments..incredible job..
lilyflower101 chapter 17 . 6/30/2016
I'm sad that this is over!
But happy there's going to be more!
CowgirlKelly chapter 17 . 6/30/2016
Can't wait for the next story in the series! Please post an authors note on this story so I can make sure you find it! I can't wait!
Guest chapter 17 . 6/30/2016
Absolutely loved it! ️
Spawn chapter 17 . 6/30/2016
It's understandable that Carlisle wants to make the rules clear to everyone. I agree that only Carlisle, Esme, Alice, and Jasper should be allowed to spank Tabby. It wouldn't be fair to her otherwise. I'm glad that Jasper agreed to the rules and staying.

I thought the handing out of the family crests and being welcomed into the family was a nice touch. It's natural that it is going to take some getting used to with such a large family now. Jasper and Peter are used to being in command, so I'm not surprised that they would have difficulty being disciplined.

Good job on the story. I'm looking forward to the next one.
JacobBlackk chapter 17 . 6/30/2016
I so completely can't waiiiiiit! Love this story. So perfect. I'm starting school in August, first year of college for me... So I'm sure I'll be so busy I won't even notice either lol. But glad you updated, and I appreciate the share of your wonderful gift.
debbie111908 chapter 16 . 5/16/2016
MORE! But still I think Alice should still have her gift, I mean just because Tabby does doesn't mean Alice shouldn't and we all know Alice never had control over hers like Tabby and it only affect her at times not all the time unless she was watching for big movements in one area. So maybe give her some kind of gift that would well round not only Tabby's but also Jasper's make them the perfect little family together gift whys making them even more meant to be together.
Guest chapter 16 . 4/21/2016
I am a sucker for this story. It's so cute but not overly fluffy. Even if this doesn't lead into taught light
caseyrn12 chapter 16 . 4/19/2016
wow. jsut..WOW! love how u told all their stories..and how their little family grew..nice one
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