I really like the story line but I just have a few grievances. The whole timeline of the story is really confusing and hard to follow. This whole chapter seemed some what rushed, you could have used a little more time to go into depth and advance the story. My final issue is the ending. The chapter seems so incomplete, and honestly leaves me with lots of questions. Maybe if you did a revision some of these issues could be cleared up.

Very nice story. Thank for your work!

haha I love it!

Apologies. I just only had time to read now considering the explosion of zootopia fanfics. I'm also abroad once more for some reason and typing this on my phone .

Anyway, it does feel kinda sad that your story has concluded but at the same time, I think you paced it well enough and the flow of the story was well thought out. In a way, it's nice to see you accomplish something with the conclusion of this story and I look forward to your next zootopian adventure.

This chapter was well worth the wait! Loved how it was wolves that were dressed in the sheep clothing. A. And I most definitely think you should write another Zootopia fic, I would love to read it!

Wow. Your story is amazing. You're an awesome writer and I hope you continue this. Love it. Also who doesn't love mahogany eh?

Nick's mother is so sweet. I almost cried while reading this.
I'm so glad you decided to continue the hospital chapter since all I wanted to know is what happen next.
I hope you update soon. All your chapters have gotten my attention. You are such an amazing writer. Hey, wouldn't mind if one day you change the roles. I mean, I wouldn't mind a worried Nick over an injured to death Judy sometime ;)

Wow.. Poor Judy. She was about to lose her best friend.
I'm guessing you won't make them a couple, right? If that's the case I wouldn't have asked for anything more ;) They are so cute being just best friends. Thanks for sharing your fanfiction with us.

Yes. So much yes. Moar pl0x.

Aww that was so cute! Yeah, I definitely love your ideas. Please keep it up!

Ohhhh...! I have no words to express how much I liked this first chapter! It was so touching. I loved the way how you descrided Judy and Nick's concern for each other, especially Judy's. Personally I love their relationship. Their friendship is special and unique. The best best friends hehe.
Very well written. I like your writing style.
Can't wait to read more. And so glad Nick will be ok.

They don't taste that bad?! Hahaha - Is this what urban homesteading looks like for foxes? (Uh oh. Looks like we have roaches. ... Whalp I guess it saves me a trip to the grocery store!) _

And omg the wallpaper jammies. I am literally picturing the wallpaper pattern from the flashback in the movie. Undecided whether it's more endearing or hideous.

Healing up is important, Nicky boy. You're lucky you have such a competent partner.

h/cfriendshippygoodnessomgyas3

This is so sweet I would stop and say more but I'm rushing onto the next chapter. :)

Hooray! Finally I have found some good cop-fic! _ These two are my new fandom.
I love this. It kinda reminded me of an episode of NCIS but...with...more...fur. (and it looks like it's not over yet, on to chapter twooooooo!)

Only one thing. Are Lupus's eyes "golden brown" or "blue"? You said they were both about two sentences apart. Just fyi. (I'm going with brown for now because it's prettier imo)

You've got a great story here! I really hope that you are able to update it soon, can't wait for more!