This was so cute and in character! I loved it awww! And it built up such a perfect mix of emotions- it started with pain and then these delicate layers of emotion that built from that and it worked out amazingly well!

wow im just speechless i could even feel the doctor's pain when he hurt clara omg

Absolutely brilliant. I love this idea - would have loved to see it expanded upon. I bet there are a lot of tricky situations the Doctor and his companions get into that call for such solutions. You demonstrated one such possibility beautifully.

Dark and angsty this one of course The Doctor would never hit her intentionally. It hurts him he had to. The end made up for it.

Wow. Really nice. Stupid village men. Thanks for the story.

What a heartbreakingly wonderful story!

That angst monster in me is very satisfied. Love the comforting too, of course

So amazing! Everything you write is beautiful!
I know Jenna has left, but please continue writing The Doctor (Matt or Peter) and Clara forever. They are an incredible pair and you are an amazing writer.

Save them they both will.
..but with don't think they will change the village ways ..good story..more please..

Amazing :) I loved the idea. (even though the Doctor would never hurt Clara) Brilliant writing, can't wait for future stories!

This is very beautiful!