| Reviews for Grapefruit and Icecream |
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the17thmuse chapter 6 . 12/24/2017 Nice and interesting AU. I was a bit sad they killed Roman off in Volume 3:( |
Akuma-Heika chapter 6 . 4/17/2017 Taiyang wasn't concerned that an older man was interested enough in his daughter to pay a large debt off? Where's the shotgun?! lol This was fun. Trying to figure out where it is timeline wise since he mentioned being locked in the ship, but is now free and Cinder hasn't done anything. This is before the conclusion of S3, but I thought it was understood Cinder was up to something big, and that Roman likely wouldn't be free until that was concluded. |
Yubella chapter 7 . 3/2/2017 i want more ruby and neo |
Sapphire chapter 7 . 8/22/2016 Sorry I did not comment on any of the other chapters my sister just told me that people like it better if I comment on every chapter of a story. I loved this and my sister told me to read it because it was a great story and she was right it was amazing. |
herro2u2 chapter 6 . 4/3/2016 there was rosewick. I'm good |
ferrous chapter 7 . 3/30/2016 Hello The Inspectre, Back again with reading your fics. Grapefruit and Icecream was an interesting exploration. I had never thought about Torchwick's motivations in working for Cinder nor did I ever consider Neo's role his life. The more I think about it, the more I notice some strange occurrences in the canonverse. Too bad Torchwick got eaten. All in all, there is a lot you can be proud of in this fic, including the central idea and the character portrayals. -Ferr |
thesonofabitchguy chapter 6 . 3/20/2016 Yet again a flawlessly beautiful work of art I definitely cannot wait to read more of your works |
ODST110 chapter 6 . 3/6/2016 How'd you like that finale? heh heh heh |
ODST110 chapter 4 . 3/6/2016 Collateral Damage does seem to be a specialty of theirs |
ODST110 chapter 3 . 3/6/2016 Damages eh? I'm shocked, truly |
ODST110 chapter 2 . 3/6/2016 10 dollars a round, very hard to forget |
ODST110 chapter 1 . 3/6/2016 So is it Neo or? It sounds a lot like Neo minus the hair |
TykkiMikk chapter 7 . 3/6/2016 Did this have to be short? I wouldn't mind you continueing this fic because it would be funny and all. |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/13/2016 This was an amazing fic. I really wish you would continue this as a ruby X neo as there are not enough of those fics and so far it has been an amazing setup. I really want to see how you could develop this. Please continue writing this story. |
DinoGuy2000 chapter 6 . 2/13/2016 Sweet! I liked this a lot more than I thought I would. Good work! |