What an epic enjoyable story, great pacing, fun and exciting with lots of yummy meat and just enough fluff to have time for excitement to build. Very well done.

Omg that wAs epic!

I cried at the scene of lily and James. You have a real talent for writing realistic emotions. Good job!

I would ordinarily be upset with Dumbledore’s nomenclature for the Hogwarts forest, but I just read a rather remarkable article that explains how to use the word “buffalo” and only the word “buffalo” eight times in a single sentence and have it be considered grammatically correct.

I’m sorry, but you don’t “win” an Order of Merlin, you are awarded one. It’s sort of the Wizarding equivalent for the US’ Medal of Honor or UK’s Victoria Cross… which of course is also why Lockhart being awarded one would be a huge slap in the face for the Minister who gave it to him when it is revealed that the man is a fraud.

Where are all these familiar presences suddenly failures?

My guess? It isn’t a dark text that explains the Horcrux Ritual, but rather a Sith Holocron.

ROFLMAO, Luna is definitely Touched by the Force.

Holy fucking hell, I’m so hyped for the rest of this story ! I absolutelyove all the Jedis that you have alive. God and Asajj is brilliant and I’m gonna love seeing all them together

I knew sacking the house like she did was a bad idea !

What an avalanche of information ! I was really looking forward the reactions of the whole group when they left earth for the first time and I was not disappointed ! Bloody hell, Hermione was hilarious !

Holy shit. If Harry felt like that, I fear for Daphne ! I’m happy Kox helped Yoda and who I guess was Aayla Secura ?

I love how goblins respect being threatened and hurt ! Makes them much funnier especially when Nox is dealing with them

Go Harry ! Wonderful confrontation ! All the emotions and thoughts going on, you wrote them so well!

Nice to see Nox beat Vitiate!

So we have two escapees ? That will be the perfect opportunity to have Harry torture and kill him

Well done ! You managed to kinda involve the Chamber and make sense at the same time ! At first I was hoping for some sweet torture but the group made me realise that it was stupid...

Can Nox use Life Drain or Terror ? (The SW KOTOR powers ?)

Isn’t there a Grey Jedi code ?

I’m sad that Ginny won’t be the pairing because you have one hell of a basis to make it happen ! If not her, I’m hoping Daphne or Tracey or Luna ! Luna would certainly be fun !

I also want to bet that the last person of the group is Gabrielle !

I love Nox and Tonks ! Not a pairing I had in mind when I thought about Nox but it’s actually great ! As Remus is with the wolf lady, both pairings are perfect !

Hahahaha I knew Luna was gonna be special but damn I was not expecting her to be that hilarious ! I just love how straight forward she is !