tonks sounds like boot camp that moment tonks guides them through sex

Interesting story hope see more from you soon.

Great little one shot I'd love to see it developed into more. Especially liked Tonks mentoring them in the ways of love.

Good one

I liked that it wasn't a threesome. Although I do like triads, the feel of this was different and unexpectedly satisfying. Great way to kill off the horcrux. Thx for sharing.

love it please write more

Nice one, and I'll bet Tonksk got quite aroused for watching them put her teaching into practice. I wonder if she later joined them?

Great story here, but I would have loved to see a threesome.

My third major favorite from your oneshot collection! Thank you! I really like this one because I love the angle that making love destroys Harry's Horcrux.

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A really nice story, with a lot more going for it than just the lemon. Yes, some of it's stock, but you make a couple of nice riffs off of canon.

The scene at King's Cross was nice and makes good sense.

While of course, there is a lot for all three to go through yet before they put paid to Voldemort's account, there is really no need to expand this. Good job!

TGM

i want to read the other version as well... i hope you continue this story line

Continue!

Great chapter/story depending on if you write more of it.

I liked it. So now you can create an other one or two shot with all three in it. Either a one shot time or pull Tonks into a three way marriage so Hermione is Mrs. Potter and Tonks becomes the Black bride.
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