I had so much pleasure reading your story ! !
it was incredible and it motivated me to write again so... thank you for your hard work c:

Why does a guest have my profile pic?

Hmm. A pity Geno Frisk had to vanish in order to give Asriel life. XP Would have been amusing to see TWO Frisks give Chara hell with their adorableness.

Dear benster,

I really like this story. I have read it and re-read it multiple times. Just one thing. Do you mind correcting "Undine" to "Undyne"?

Thanks.

Oh. My. Asriel.
I have no words to describe how awesome this is! And that final battle scene was so awesome, I wish it was animated!

can i help make this a comic dub and could you email me what you would like your CHARActer to look like my email adress is i also have a channel on youtube i just need audio for the dub and ill do the illestratios/ (comic padges)

this should be a comic dub if it is't already

You can truly feel the Naruto fan writing here, nice and punny.

I noticed a number of typos in just the first two chapters, but one of them I am going to incorporate into my headcanon: butterscotch-cinnaMOM pie, instead of cinnaMON. Huh. Actually, both are punny. But cinnamom is the more heart-warming one. :-)

It's bad time o'clock.

You have more naming talent than Goat Bro and Goat Dad. I don't think they could come up with what you did. Anyone else, sure, but not the goats.

The only reason v day is awesome any year is because I get CANDY! Especially chocolate. Oh no, I'm showing Charapathic tendencies...

Even if Doggo is my least favorite dog character, including Endogeny, I still don't want him to face the wrath of Goat Mom. At least it was Doggo and not one of the others...

Frisk isn't a PATIENCE trait, so why does it talk about his PATIENCE? I notice seemingly minor details that can mean everything or nothing.

Is it weird that I want a pile of dog residue? I know a place that collects cat husks, so it can't be THAT bad, but still, it's dog residue. Oh well...