I don't know if you intend to continue this story or not but you're off to a good start.

I love this cute story! I look forward to reading more! I am glad that Naruto's life seems to be turning around :). Please update soon!

Hi this is great you have potential and so does this fik please continue

Well, it's been a year since you last updated. I hope you have not abandoned this story it's adorable!

If english is not your first language, you're doing an excellent job. There are a few mistakes here and there but nothing major. What you've written so far is great and I'd love to read more!

Hey, I really like your story! The idea is very nice, and you write it out very sweetly. I love the interaction, and how caring they all are.

However maybe I would suggest getting a beta reader. You have some spelling mistakes and sometimes your grammar is a little clumsy. Easily fixed though! And it doesn't impede the audience is getting the meaning of the story. Still, just something to think about.

Not sure if you're still updating, but I really liked this! Best of luck!

Plz continue , it's really good

very nice storyI hope you'll write more soon

Yo, just checking in. You know, I was going to read it, but then I remembered that I forgot to favorite and follow this. heh, sorry for that, BUT from now on I will read every chapter as soon as it comes out! ;P

Fun read keep it up but u do need a beta reader for grammar and little bit of spelling

Evil evil author making me cry!

I like the story idea here. I have a warm part of my heart for the Nara family so I love reading fics where they interact with Naruto.

There really is potential for an adorable story here.

As for the writing itself, there are some spelling/word choice/grammar issues going on throughout. As someone who taught English as a Foreign Language for several years, these are the sort of mistakes that I would see from my students so I'm wondering if you are not a native speaker of English. If that is the case, I love that you are putting yourself out there anyway and trying to write in English. It's awesome!

I think what you need is a beta or someone to read your chapters before you post. The errors don't make this story hard to read, but there are plenty of people who would stop reading a story because of grammar and other errors and it would be awful if that was the reason that people don't explore your story. Something as simple as a beta to proofread your story would go pretty far.

I hope this didn't come off as mean because that was not my intent. I really do like your story and see some great potential, but it would come across better if the writing was cleaned up a bit.

Hope to see more from you.

The word deer is plural like moose that is also plural and singular both (strange I know but it's the truth).

This is an interesting read, and I can say that because I don't leave reviews that often. Still there are some errors, look over your story before posting.

Still I want to see more, update soon.

Aww this is a really cute chapter :) can't wait to read the next one!