Reviews for Bottleneck
FanGirlFreak16 chapter 2 . 9/26/2016
Oh, please write another chapter! This is amazing!
ilovecartoonsgirl chapter 2 . 2/21/2016
Thank you thank you thank you for writing more! This was definitely beautiful! :) The whole soul communicating thing was interesting and unique (and wonderful) and gahh! I just love this chapter! Great job:)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2016
Pretty good can't wait for next part
Miiv12 chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
Flowey is not a good life coach is one of my favourite fics of all time.
And to finally see a scene like this,even if its not in the original fic,makes me feel..satisfied,
i just hope that the original can do it as well as this.
ilovecartoonsgirl chapter 1 . 1/27/2016
Don't cry...don't...WAAHHHH! Oh, there are a lot of feels here...a whole freaking lot. And it hurts just to look at them! This is a good chapter though...good job.
RisingSm0ke chapter 1 . 1/27/2016
You will be happy to know I was smiling by the end of this. You've effectively turned me to the dark side bc this didn't even make me bat an eye~ I'm oddly proud of myself bc I used to be such a cry baby for sad fanfiction.
As you know, I'm all for Papyrus being the only reason Sans is alive. We've talked extensively about how depressed poor ol Sans is. So I loved this. It's all the yes.
Glass The Absol chapter 1 . 1/27/2016
Very nice! I've always loved your writing (I got hooked by that Blue Exorcist FF you wrote) and I love how much detail you put into everything! Very well done, and I hope to see more!