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"They both saw the world differently. Experienced the world differently. Which was a comfort in its own way. Because no matter how smart Hiro Hamada was, he would never have the perspective of Jack Overland." I really liked that part. It's refreshing to read about it, yknow? Especially in this day and age when you can see everyone's capabilities with just a few clicks. I love your characterization of Jack, he's such a delight to read.

this was so good ! the respect i have for gobber as a teacher i and damn do i relate to astrid, that hit close to home and that hit strong i love everything about this chapter aaaa im excited to read about jack next chapter !

Yesssss!
Finally!
I've been waiting for an update for a long time now!
I almost lost hope
But never!
I keep coming to this site in hopes that you'd write a new story and you did not disappoint...
Can I say love you

Gosh this whole chapter is gorgeous. I love angsty yet hopeful Merida, i love that the chapter began with her resenting Rapunzel and ended with her empathizing with her. And gosh, yes I absolutely agree that people tend to underestimate my girl Rapunzel she's so often pushed aside as ditzy and bubbly when she's just as strong and smart as the others !

Mmhmhm ah yes i do love myself a dose of Second Hand Embarrasment from Hiccup Horrendous Haddock III himself, it's one of the main reasons why i read Hiccup-centric fics lmao anw this was a great chapter !

THIS WHOLE CHAPTER HAD ME SMILING LIKE AN IDIOT HSHDHS i love the rhythm and voice of the writing! Hiccup's voice in writing is definitely my favorite and the flavor in this is *chef's kiss* the world building too !

One thing that bugged me in some spaces were "Hiccup's dialogue"-information-"Merida's reply" in the same paragraph. It'd be better if it's—

"Hiccup's dialogue" Hiccup's action or information.
"Merida's reply."

It's minor and just me nit-picking but youre doing great!

Ohmygoodness i think ive read this before but i forgot about it and now it has 19 chapters ! Damn this chapter was a LOT, so heavy! i love the way you write, it really showcased the characters and the world youre building ! i cant wait to pick up where i left off !

HE LIVES! With a cliff hanger to boot! oh how I've missed you and your story. leaves me begging for more.

I love this story. I randomly came across it over a year ago and loved it, then went away to wait for it to be updated. Then, a few days ago, I remembered it and decided to re-read it, in the hopes that it had been updated. But it has not. Regardless, I have re-read it, and loved it even more.

This is one of my favourite fics ever, and I would love if it was updated. So please, continue this story, it would be a shame if it wasn't.

I adored this! I’m so excited to see just how everything ties together!

Love this :)

Great chapter. Really enjoying hiccups character development thanks to Merida. It’s like she’s taking toothless’s place from httyd. Can’t wait for more.

This chapter is incredible, I absolutely love the way Gobber stood up for Hiccup against Astrid, it really put her in her place. The tears? Bonus! The gumball part of the chapter was so hilarious.

I always love reading this story! The characters are amazing and the way that they interact is so real!
I don't know if you know, but there is a book series that Rise of the Guardians was based off of (it's technically a children's series but I love it nonetheless) Idk if that is helpful or not, but if you are curious about that story-line, hit me up and I'll give you the rundown ;)