| Reviews for Mixed Roles |
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takedigi chapter 1 . 8/16/2016 Awesome. I love this kind of One-shots. Friendship, Family, With some humor and emotions. |
arckane chapter 1 . 4/6/2016 this is a pretty legit one shot the feeling are there nice character interaction awesome |
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 1 . 3/27/2016 Nice story here, but bringing in the hat was what sold it. Ideas: Maybe something with Princess Shirahoshi talking to Nami? I ask because in a sense Nami seemed like a role model for Shirahoshi after all the flashbacks and history talk, and she also respect Luffy, so the princess might ask Nami more about herself and the crew? |
GreenDrkness chapter 1 . 2/4/2016 I love how Nami just panics and I can actually empathize with her with how you write then I just feel a sudden calm as soon as Luffy disproves her fears Hmm maybe have Zoro be lost but find Luffy as a coincidence but Luffy is being chased by marines and he's just having a ball with it but Zoro just cuts them down before they even reach him Keep on the writes |
Kutori chapter 1 . 1/29/2016 That was sweet. Thanks for sharing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2016 You should ask Chopper instead since he was a doctor. Biology is strong point to become a doctor, no? As for the story, i like this. Although i prefer romance than friendship hahah but thats the way LuNa love each other IMO. Love this couple and fic. |
Mariachanne chapter 1 . 1/27/2016 i think you would be better off with Chopper. Dont get me wrong Robin is smart but she studies history Chopper is a doctor so wouldnt asking Chopper for help be more useful. By the way great chapter! |
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 1/27/2016 AW! This was AWESOME! A tender little moment between captain and navigator! The part where she thought Luffy did it because she wasn't there was SO SAD! Got me right in the gut and feels, man! The part where she thought more than she said, too, was SO beautiful! Loved it! I love writing OP oneshots! Just posted one the other day, in fact! It's my sixth one so far, and there are more to come! I've found over the years I don't have as much patience for multichapter fics like I used to. lol. So, yeah, I highly recommend oneshots! They're like little Christmas presents! Rock on! Can't wait for more from you! |
Pen-Always-In-Hand chapter 1 . 1/27/2016 This is very sweet and wel thought out. Good job |
kuro02 chapter 1 . 1/27/2016 amazing onshot ou really good at it |