This is a really good story, I really like this one shot. It kept the characters true to themselves and I like the way it was written! If this was a longer story I would definitely commit to reading it. There are so many jackxrhys fanfics but not many are nearly as good as this one ! I really wish there was more to this but I'm glad I go to read this at least

Nice fic I loved it I always wanted to know what jack would go through if you kept the ECHO Eye.

Love~ Love~

Wow. Will there be more to this? Like when Rhys comes back?

! Whaaaaat? Bro you could totally keep going with that that's a great story! :D I loved it! Good job kiddo.

This was incredibly well written. I loved it. If you ever end up making a full story out of this, it has a lot of potential! It also makes a lot of sense. The choice whether or not to crush the ECHO eye, could have consequences.
I applaud you for keeping Jack in character. Holding grudges is what he does best, other than being Handsome, that is.

Utterly amazing. I always had a love/hate relationship with HJ, and am really hoping you continue this someday, because it captures his personality perfectly

Have you thought about expanding this into a expanding story? Your writing style and character depictions are very good! I suppose it would kinda be like a Season 2?

I really like your story! (Though I am a little confused why it has no reviews yet)
The way you depicted Jack's and Rhys' character is perfect and I like that you wrote about what happened after the crash of Helios and how Rhys begins to rebuild ATLAS. I just finished Tales from the Borderlands a few day ago and I must admit I kind of hoped that Jack would appear again at the end (also didn't crushed the ECHO-eye, though looking back it might have been a little cruel...). So I like the way your story was going and even if it has no 'real' end, I'll see this as the-last-Jack-appearance I missed so dearly at the end of TftB.
Thanks for writing it, it's really great work!