Please update. I really love your writing

I really love this and your writing is so good! I look forward to more!

Update? Please? Pretty please with a cherry on top?
I LOVED your story! It's original with an interesting plot, and I can't wait for more!

This is a lovely story, and I just wanted to day I've really enjoyed reading your work.

...Nice story...it was interesting to say atleast, love the plot and yeah...well done.

Like it love it continue it please this is great can't wait for the next chapter sorry for the short review but I gotta go so bye for now and good night

can't wait for the nxt chapter :)

Please please please continue this; I am really really interested in how you're going to make this work.
That bit about Tobirama and Izuna already meeting with each other is a nice touch, and I'm curious how their connection will affect future interactions between Tobirama and other people and their subsequent relationship.

Izuna and Tobirama were lovers, weren't they? (forgot to put this in the precedent rant)

Please, please tell me Izuna is Itachi the Second (or Itachi the Izuna the Second). Because both of them has the damn habit of fucking mentally with their loved ones.
Tell me that Izuna hasn't purposely let himself being killed by Tobirama in a desperate attempt to give his eyes to his brother and stop Madara's blindness.
Please tell me that Izuna hasn't let himself getting killed by Tobirama in an harebrained scheme to give his last moments to Tobirama (nevermind that said last moments are caused by the albino) or something equally as stupid.
I beg you, tell me that Hikaku's message to Tobirama isn't something along the line of "Having fought each other for years and being able to predict each other moves Izuna should have be able to dodge your last move or at least making sure the wound fall to somewhere non-fatal so you should not blame yourself for his death because he let himself get killed by you".
I beg you on my knees, tell me that not all the Uchiha are this stupid and that I'm seeing things.
PLEASE!
Sorry for eventual grammatical or dialettical errors but English is not my main language.

damn, I'm absolutely loving the way you've written this story and how you've portrayed the characters. can't wait for the next chapter

Oiii this is painful and at the same time so nice

Update please..

Oh I really like this story. I love the idea that Izuna and Tobirama knew each other before. I want to know how well they knew each other. This is so good. I cant wait to see where you take this.

Love this fic! Can't wait for the next chapter! xx