I like the way you develop this story. This AU is really good and I like the way you portray the characters. Too bad you haven't updated in a while. Are you still going to finish this? I'd love to read more.
Have a happy and healthy Easter in these crazy times. Thank you for sharing.

Well I like it so far.

You know i really hope that you continue this arnt very many good divs from this genre and you've got a great concept here. The only real criticism i have is that the story is very fast paced. For the scope of the game there doesn't seem to be much room for character development to be natural. Just a thought. :)

Why do i get the feeling that the rumours about Jyscals death were not unfounded and that the perfime is to hide the farplane scent? It would also mean Brothers cake was right :)

that was awesome I loved the chapter and I can't wait for more:)

Another interesting story. I do like the idea of Seymour as a good guy for once.

Haha, I actually though Seymour's reaction was perfect and well justified. Loved the showdown.

How long has Tidus been with the Al-Bhed? I feel like he's gained fluency of their language rather quickly. A summer in France after a couple of years of study and I still got corrected by the locals. Took me out of the story a bit.

Bwahaha is it bad that I'm eager for the father-son reunion?

Mwuahaha, the plot thickens !

Haha, Jycal's being alive threw me in for a loop for a second, but then I remembered that Seymour wasn't around to murder him. I'm assuming there's going to be a confrontation between the two...?

"Your grasp of the obvious astonishes me" haha. I had been wondering if you were going to maintain Seymour's way of speaking despite his altered circumstances!

Haha, I see our heroes are going to be saved some grief due to GoodGuy!Seymour's abilities.

You had me at this very thoughtful foreword, haha. I have always adored and sympathised Seymour and was left a bit disappointed in his portrayal in the original game (though I adore it still). There was just so much potential he had as a character that was lost in the annoying pop up bosses. Thus, I'm very much looking forward to diving into this story!

I read Cycle of Sin and quite enjoyed it. When you mentioned this story in your notes for that one, I decided to check it out. So far I'm enjoying this story. The romance between Tidus and Yuna was ine of my favorite aspects of Final Fantasy X, so I am slighly wary about this story's pairings. Having said that, I'll give your pairings a shot.

I do wish you would attempt to write battle scenes, though. You mentioned having difficulty writing them while stating them to be of dubious quality. I still think you should make the attempt, even if it ends up on the cutting room floor.