Update?

UPDATE PLEASE
this is really interesting story i want to see what happens next

Can’t wait for the next chapter

I love it! If you have time, can you please update it? I can't wait to see what happens next!

hello Sakura .. i love this prologue so much. i'm eager to read the Following chapters. and see the meeting between Liana and Dumby. and how they will do with Voldy. will Roy go with Liana in the magic world ?

Really good, Can't wait till next update, Love that you have Roy and Liana married

Please update soon.

that was awesome I loved the chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next:)

I'm really happy you'll be writing again. The story has a nice idea but I'm not so sure I'm all for the deaging thing. I mean Liana has already been through so much crap and is married to Roy (even if it happened when they were both drunk as hell) so I'm not sure if her being turned into a little brat again is such an appealing course of action. It would kinda make the whole thing with Roy (and everyone else in general) really awkward. But besides that I can't wait for more "A Shinobi, a Mother, and then a Witch" chapters.

I really would lıve to read more of it especially if she never returns to England.

Nice!

Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter and I eager to see how you are gonna continue with this excellent story

I really love the changes that you have made. Keep up the wonderful work.

Not sure what is originally written, and what you have added. There is a lot of grammatical issues present, from wording, to tenses, to just general weirdness that makes entire paragraphs flow poorly. Character behavior is generally off just enough to be awkward, in both action and dialogue. There's really no part of having one's arm blown off that rational dialogue should occur afterwards. It's an interesting idea, but from what I've read it seems like it would've been better for you to simply write this concept yourself, instead of adopting and then trying to adapt it.

- Humans who like to play God must pay a steep price for their arrogance. That is Truth. Father's words never rang truer when you think about Albus Dumbledore and his plans.
- Oh, this is gonna be interesting. I just know it.
- Severus doesn't hate Liana, but still considers James a girl-stealer. Huh.
- So Truth has been blocking all attempts of the wizards to find Liana, until Fate intervened. Makes me wonder what are Fate's motives for that. I mean, I get the possible picture, but I'm wondering if I could be wrong on my assumptions.