You are not out of practice. Your gift of storytelling is hard wired. That was excellent. I had no clue about the ending - but what a perfect explanation of Endgame Admiral Janeway’s motivation!
Freaking brilliant and totally fresh! Many thanks for picking “picking up your pen.”

Oh, my. Lovely story, not quite sad and full of possibilities.

I first thought of "Coda" when you brought in the bright light; like the Orb and prophets better.

Enjoyed your oblique references to some of your other stories; very nice.

I am not sure of the ending and what plans she may have in mind, but I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

Always hopeful your STV muse will awaken often and urgently.

Excellent!

Great chapter.

Ohhhh that’s an unexpected twist heheh

You updated! Omg! Thanks!

How the writersblock doing? ...keep writing keep writing keep writing :):)

First story I read from you...and now I want more. This was awesome, thank you! You' re a great writer.

I always love your writing. Thank you!

Oh that was an unexpected plotline, but now i want to know more!

This was not what I expected ... it's haunting ... and lovely. Well done, and thank you!

A fitting ending, had to go back again and read it all again and I just loved it.

I’m so glad you came back to this story and completed it, even though the end was not anything I had expected. I enjoyed the references to some of your other excellent fanfics. Thank you.

Yay! Omg I love this story! Thank you for finishing it. Didn’t go exactly as I was expecting, but I really like the idea of Endgame Janeway being moving by a spiritual experience being part of her motivation to go back and change the timeline. I hope you will share your writing talents with us again.

Oh my gosh, Laura, it thrills me to no end whenever we're blessed with more of your beautiful writing! Wow, that ending. I was not expecting that! Absolutely lovely!