| Reviews for Chocolate Cake |
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Zer0 chapter 7 . 5/18 Omg awww! Soo cute I LOVE it. I need something like this, thanks so much for making such a cute amazing adrienette fan fic! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17 O.M.G. I LOVE this! |
Zer0 the Werid0 chapter 7 . 5/18 This was just a great story, it filled that place in my heart reserved just for adrinette, thanks so much for making this pawsativly adorable fanfic. |
Alya Imposter chapter 1 . 3/27 Girl, you mess up big time. . . . . . lol |
Izane Sunstrider chapter 7 . 12/16/2018 Too perfect! Too much perfect! I caaaaaaannnn’t— *smashes favorite button with face repeatedly* I love this so muuuuuuuch! |
almooneh chapter 7 . 10/9/2018 that shit just made adrienette my favourite ship! thanks for such a cute story! |
Rutebega chapter 7 . 8/8/2018 Ah! This is so cute! I love it so much! |
ali chapter 2 . 3/9/2018 yass |
Guest chapter 7 . 12/9/2017 It was so awesome. I liked how the author included specific details It was really nice to feel like I was there |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/26/2017 Awesome sauce |
alaskanwolf44 chapter 7 . 11/6/2017 amazing. had me crying with laughter! |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/11/2017 AAAAHHhHhHhhH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH OHMYGOSH |
eliminaaado chapter 7 . 7/21/2017 Ahahahahahaha that was a good story, you hooked me in well for it and I was hanging on to every word. But, it was very seemed like you guessed for a lot of things (I know Mythril Moth covered most things in their review, I just wanted to add two more) who bakes a cake w flour then sugar then egg then cocoa powder? There wasn't even any butter or any other kind of fat, and if you're making a cake, you cream the sugar and butter then add the other ingredients, I 'm sorry but it really got on my nerves! I could maybe excuse you if it was an all in one cake, but there was no butter, and trust me, it would not be gooey if it didn't have butter. And Adrien advanced to quickly for someone baking, if you wanted a cute fic maybe you could've made him mess up more and be a hindrance more than a help so that Marinette could realise that maybe he's not perfect and start to like him for him. Next time I would look things up bc you're clearly a talented writer to improve your story. (Sorry for complaining so much, but sometimes criticism can be better than just positivityeven though you've definitely earned all the good reviews. |
kiki chapter 7 . 7/16/2017 OMG IT WAS SO FRICKIN' GOOD! KEEP WRITING AND POST MORE! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT! |
CrazyNerd03 chapter 7 . 7/15/2017 This. This is one of the sweetest ones I've ever read. One of my favorites. |