Reviews for Baton Pass |
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![]() ![]() ![]() plz update |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update, it's very interesting |
![]() ![]() As per manga it's shown..children gets their trait from parents bloodline or personality...so Naruto should have been much more smarter than depicted... |
![]() ![]() Oh no. Couldn't author make Naruto smaet |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey writer i have a suggestion for you if you put Naruto against Neji in the final round of the Chunin Exams can you let neji win because I've seen Naruto too often won plus stupid insults |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good to see that naruto might still fight neji! That was an exciting match in the original series! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, that ending. The fights were great, thanks for the read. Wish Hinata wasn't defeated though. Still, I guess that was too much to hope for. It IS a bit unrealistic after all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back! Its good to see another chapter. I noticed several spelling errors. Other than that good work. I'm glad he managed to get Karin to ortega! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to have you back. Loved the chapter, İ only have one major complaint: please write the names correctly. Just two examples that come to mind are "Kuriena" Kurenai and "Yorio" Yoroi. İt may seem like a small thing, but it can be pretty bothering. İt's like a black stripe on the screen when you are watching your favourite show, or a constant buzz during a podcast. You can kinda enjoys the show with it, but it is annoying. İ wish you luck with your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update, it's great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ughhh no more chapters. I heavily urge you to please continue your story. I love it so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hoping for a kin pairing I could list reasons but mostly because she uses a similar fighting style to haku she was never fully flushed out in Canon and if she was smart enough to go to anko she wouldn't have been a meat suit for a hokage |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go |
![]() ![]() ![]() plz keep going |