Reviews for Baton Pass
TampaBayMike95 chapter 1 . 4/21
plz update
Wika0304 chapter 10 . 3/1
please update, it's very interesting
Guest chapter 3 . 1/3
As per manga it's shown..children gets their trait from parents bloodline or personality...so Naruto should have been much more smarter than depicted...
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3
Oh no. Couldn't author make Naruto smaet
arinst2305 chapter 10 . 12/30/2019
hey writer i have a suggestion for you
if you put Naruto against Neji in the final round of the Chunin Exams
can you let neji win
because I've seen Naruto too often won plus stupid insults
anarion87 chapter 10 . 12/30/2019
nice chapter
Shy911 chapter 10 . 12/30/2019
Good to see that naruto might still fight neji! That was an exciting match in the original series!
Acolyte of the Blood Moon chapter 10 . 12/30/2019
Lol, that ending. The fights were great, thanks for the read. Wish Hinata wasn't defeated though. Still, I guess that was too much to hope for. It IS a bit unrealistic after all.
Shy911 chapter 9 . 12/5/2019
Welcome back! Its good to see another chapter. I noticed several spelling errors. Other than that good work. I'm glad he managed to get Karin to ortega!
Acolyte of the Blood Moon chapter 9 . 12/5/2019
Glad to have you back. Loved the chapter, İ only have one major complaint: please write the names correctly. Just two examples that come to mind are "Kuriena" Kurenai and "Yorio" Yoroi. İt may seem like a small thing, but it can be pretty bothering. İt's like a black stripe on the screen when you are watching your favourite show, or a constant buzz during a podcast. You can kinda enjoys the show with it, but it is annoying.

İ wish you luck with your stories!
Wika0304 chapter 8 . 8/24/2019
please update, it's great
Ito Uchiha chapter 8 . 5/5/2019
Ughhh no more chapters. I heavily urge you to please continue your story. I love it so far.
Blazing heart frigid soul chapter 1 . 3/16/2017
Hoping for a kin pairing

I could list reasons but mostly because she uses a similar fighting style to haku she was never fully flushed out in Canon and if she was smart enough to go to anko she wouldn't have been a meat suit for a hokage
arinasution5 chapter 8 . 10/17/2016
Go
TampaBayMike95 chapter 8 . 10/16/2016
plz keep going
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