Reviews for Becoming
Mark chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
Nice work. This is what I wished happened in the lords of Shadow ending. Marie possibly saved thousands with that talk with Gabriel, trying to get him to calm down and think rationally.

Good writing, its always heart warming to see that despite what he has become he still loves Marie.
Orionali chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
Wow, a most interesting re- holy smokes, is he actually *staying* good-aligned?! This was unexpected, but still a highly pleasant turn of events! 3 A great one-shot, hope to see more in the future!