I'd fallen behind on updates, but that just meant I had a larger chunk of story to enjoy. Obi-Wan and Sabe together are the cutest thing; the contrast between that and their situation is all the more striking. Leaving Trinna on Alderaan was heartbreaking. I'm excited to see what Mon Mothma does as she plans a political strategy. But most of all, I hope the children find somewhere safe.

The world just has it out for Sabè sometimes, doesn't it? Not even the weather's on her side. xD

Mon Mothma was a pleasant surprise; I completely forgot she was from Chandrila. She seemed a bit more intense here than she was in the OT and Rebels, but then the Empire has only recently taken over, so it makes perfect sense that she'd be anxious to get a rebellion started as soon as possible.

Looking forward to checking in with Obi-Wan and the younglings next time. (Assuming no disasters befall Sabè on her way back. Fingers crossed.)

Oooo! Bringing in Mon Mothma at this point is excellent, and I love love love the idea that Sabé and the others managed to accidentally lay the seeds for an early rebellion purely because they're desperate to help the children.

For all that she has maybe two scenes in the original movie. Mon is on of my favorites.

Loved it!

It's great to see you back! And Mon Mothma is definitely a favorite of mine. At least she was only shocked to see Sabé aka "Senator Amidala" because she thought Padmé was on the run, and not dead as she would have been in canon - still, her shocked reaction made me smile. And her very one-note focus on the big political picture felt really in-character!

I was a bit surprised at how non-waterproof the hair dye and cosmetics were, though, especially the hair dye. You may have mentioned this earlier, but did they not have access to proper "professional" grade products and so Sabé had to use very cheap, extremely not-waterproof, probably plot-relevant products?

I'm excited for sooner updates as we draw to the end, but please do take care of yourself too! Take your time, we'll wait :)

Oh I miss curt and snappy Sabé! Its been so long since she's been able to make a real appearance! Back almost before she hurt her leg I think.

Mon Mothma was such a big part of the rebellion, I'm surprised she hasn't gotten a rebellion started, but then again, she was more of a supporting role than anything else.

Another great chapter! Im excited for your next one!

This is really good! Personally, I find it very hard to write a scene where the two main characters are having a conversation in which they carry in completely different assumptions. Well done with it.

You can do it. Believe in yourself!

And if you can't believe in yourself, believe in me, who believes in you.

Something about Mothma feels *off.*

I love this story! Looking forward to the rest of it!

"How do I join the rebellion? When do we attack?!" - awesome characterization of Mon Mothma haha

Weekly updated?! YES! Not that I ever had a problem with how you updated, you ALWAYS made the wait worth it. Even if the chapters would have me on the edge of my seat. Anyways, love the chapter and I can’t wait to read what happens next!

Omg! So exiting! Glad you had Mon Mothma so in character (for me at least) since people always seem to forget she was so central to the creation of the rebellion. Can’t wait for further updates!

Aaaaaaawkwaaaaard.