I am LOVING this fanfic, but where is the next chapter!? I know it's hard work, but I love this story so much! Please do more!

When is the next chapter coming out? It's been almost a year since the last update!

Interesting, are the ''parents'' abusive?

Aaaaaay kawaiii

I think that this concept is really cool! I like how you're writing the other characters in undertale, and your pokemon choices are excellent! I look forward to more writing from you in the future :)

I love this story so much! I love how you have the story of Undertale seamlessly integrated into the Pokémon world. It's fantastic!

Huh, Frisk must have been really lucky to get the hardest gym nuked first. What if someone lied about how many gym badges they had? The dogs would probably be able to smell lies though.

Ooooooh... Team _ has made an appearance. Wonder if they are actually going to be competent for once...At least Team Rocket got their first victory against Ash in the anime, so they must be improving, or they actually got some decent Pokemon for once.

cute fic

Lol asriels got a skiddo!

Hello, I have made a fanart of Frisk holding Arwen and can't figure out how to send it to you, do you know of any way I might be able to do that?

Aww...Arwen is adorable. Though it troubles me that they thought Frisk might abandon them...and what horrible person left their egg? Flowey? Chara? Anyhow, Eeveelutions everywhere. I know LOVE is slightly different than Levels, but I'm curious about how you will implement that.

Wow, I didn't notice you had even continued, ha ha. Guess that just made my comment on your prologue just a few minuets ago rather...strange! Great work!

Well, my thoughts are quite positive. You certainly have a gift of expressing your imagination through words. My suggestion...

Keep going. Stay determined and work on the rest of your book! An excellent start to what I can only think would be an excellent book.

Could you name the FeeBass Aqua?

After gym and new Pokemon, probably.