This story is awesome and I hope to see more chapters. Love to see Jack just creating ripples in the story line. Hope we get to see Jack turn feral from holding the monkey staff. Keep up the good work.

This is great! I can't wait for more. Also, I had a fun idea for Katnappe getting Akumatized. As well as some fun OW(Original Wu).

Awesome story so far! Hope you can update soon!

Yep Lila is just that bad and considering the stuff Chloe did in the past that is one hell of an accomplishment.

Okay I’m definitely loving this fic hilarious just found it and already re-reading

Thanks for updating. :)

Good character

I like how the monks willingly gave them the yo-yos to fix Jack, and Their reasons behind it.

I like their reactions to the Yin, yang would.

Yay Technology and even some wu like the Silver manta ray have trouble working in that place. So it appears Neno and Alya would be on able to get Any movies or pictures made until some sort of camera wu pops up.

I like how The two of them we’re clearly seeing there superhero partner in the other and slipping into there superhero persons a little in the fight.

Lastly bet Marinette was thinking “I am keeping there yo-yos” or “I think I found my back up yo-yos”.

P.s the yin/ Yang yo-yo is in my top five favorite wu.

Good character

I have been waiting for them too meet good Jack for so long.

I love tell everyone was freaking out about good Jack, and we’re more terrified of him like this then his normal self and some Akumas.

I love Jack’s reaction to how his friends why him the way he is and we’re willing to get him back to normal.

Lastly I wondered what would happen if a Akumatised villain goes into the yin/ Yang world with only one yo-yo?
Will only their villain persona change, will there normal personality change, or will they both change?

Good character

I like how you had Raimundo trying to resist becoming evil agin.

That’s a pretty interesting super villain. The power to ride on a cloud, and make clouds that would cause whoever touches it to be on cloud nine. Add in some wind powers and you have a pretty good super villain here.

Hawkmoth always has his eye open for those with special powers and good combat skills prior to being akumatised. Because they are guaranteed to be in the upper echelon of his creations.
Considering the monks have some elements powers and are extremely good martial artist. Their prime targets, regardless of the wu they have or the if he is having trouble coming up with good powers.

I think the writers realize the same thing by the time of season 3.

Lastly I like ladybug was completely out of it and just wanted to stare at a poster of Adrian.

Good character

I love their reaction to Jack’s injuries.

I see the girls are out for blood, and The attack on his reputation was a success.

Although, Alys might want to have the fox miraculous handy, or try not to make a scene when chase young is in town just to be on the safe side.

Oh he does care. :3

Good character

So that’s what the cat did with his new wu.

Good idea with the laser tag. It’s a fun, simple, and flexible game. Plus it’s one of the few big ones they never really used.

Jack just won A pretty good set of wu there. The question is how long can you hold onto it?

A comb for a pair scissors. Seems like a pretty good trade. Especially for a fashion designer.

Will Alya and/or Nino get in a showdown?

Lila is a poorly written character. A narcissistic sociopath and mythomaniac without redeemable qualities. Not to mention that her plans are not even good, they only work because the characters become more stupid when the script needs it. In short, she feels more like a plot device than an actual person.

Sure, Lila is a character with a lot of potential but that potential is being wasted. The same happens to Adrien and many secondary characters. Marinette "Mary Sue" Dupain-Cheng never had much potential in the first place so I don't care. Chloe is the only character who has received some depth and development, the result being barely acceptable.

The end of season 3 sucked, the end of season 2 was much better.

Could you do a chapter where Chase shows interest in Marinette?